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Hanging On The Edge

Updated on July 30, 2012


Life meltdown---heart punctured

Living in shadow---my greatest fear; depression

Tears fall like rain...my heart detonate with thorns


Dragged to hell...befriend with demons

Life became meaningless---death was calling

Mindset to suicide...



Trapped in drama, fighting ways out

No one heard nor care..

.......................................................................Isolated.............................................

Despair


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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Amazing, you've expresses so vividly how that demon takes you at your most vulnerable moments.

      Great writing as usual

      Exalt !!!

      Simba

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So vivid this poem cries out to be heard and the person to be helped. Well done.

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      chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Simba and Gypsy, Thank you both very much for reading and commenting. Thank you

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Short but outpouring with emotions and thoughts.I voted up.

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