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Another Go Around

Updated on May 2, 2010

No Feelings

The lasting word rest on thy reality’s tongue

Isn’t It the hateful word that rests In us

That gives the meaning to it all and all.

I don’t want to be this way any longer.

Let me sink into to that black sand.

Give away me and mine for your time.

Can It be ?

Me looking through you into the winds.

I think not !

Could you hold me just for a while

Hit me!

Break me!

Fuck me!

Cut me!

Your words are short and falling.

Ill cut myself till ever lasting death swallows the pretty.

I give into thee giving tree!

Dear beautiful hateful god .. Die.

And end thy board game of fright!

 

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      getmyback 7 years ago

      You and I have much in common, no doubt

      This piece especially touched me.

      truth or not it feels real, and that, in my limited experience, creates great poems/lyrics

      There isn't one line here I would change

      clap, clap, clap

      billY

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      LilithMarie 7 years ago

      I truly love this one. Very powerful in so many ways

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You Much

      For Your Kind Word's.

      I Would Like All To Know

      God Is No More Than

      A Mere Metophor In This Piece

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      OK too cool-go away

      Your going to show me up

      lol

      nice job David, glad to be a fan

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      Tara Tufford 7 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

      Appears to be some very deep feelings behind this...the best kind of it! again, very beautiful.

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You Much @Tara!

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