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He Knows What I Don't - a poem

Updated on January 25, 2014
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Kathleen Cochran is a writer & former newspaper reporter/editor who traveled the world as a soldier's better half. Her works are on Amazon.

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I patiently wait

for the brilliant blue bird

to return to my garden.

I only want to see

his lovely colors,

his graceful flight.

But he perches high in the trees,

protected in the leaves

from all watching eyes.

He is on alert

to every lurking threat,

careful not to reveal himself

until he is sure.


I only want to enjoy his beauty,

But he knows what I don't.

The hawk and the owl

don't care what color he is.


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    • kiddiecreations profile image

      Nicole K 

      3 weeks ago

      Beautiful poem!

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      20 months ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Celebrate Poetry in National Poetry Month!

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      22 months ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      During these weeks of winter, I really enjoy watching for the beautiful birds and woodpeckers in the woods behind my house. This poem came from one of those winter days.

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      3 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      I do the same thing: try to take time each week to read the latest work of the folks I follow. Time to do that again. Thanks for the read and comment.

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      ArtDiva 

      3 years ago

      Finding the time to reading more writing of authors following. The little bird written here knows what I know, the writer, has a way with words. Well worth the time reading.

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      tillsontitan: Glad you happened upon this one. I don't write many poems and I don't use many words. It's fulfilling when it touches someone.

      J-R-Fr13mon: Another poet. Beautifully written comment. Thank you.

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      Jane Ramona Rynkiewicz Frieman 

      4 years ago from Morris County, New Jersey

      The blue bird of happiness returns to your lovely and colorful garden Its song is a symphony of music, enchanting each soul who treks through your garden. That includes you. Beautiful poem.

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      Mary Craig 

      4 years ago from New York

      So well done Kathleen. Your poetry, as shown here, is beautiful and certainly very surprising (at least the ending anyway).

      Voted up, awesome, and interesting.

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Twilight Lawns: Thank you. I'm glad I shook someone loose! "Stalk up on you and you don't see it coming." High Praise!

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      Twilight Lawns 

      4 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

      Perfect. This is a "stalk up on you and don't see it coming" poem.

      I saw your comment on the question asked about poetry getting low ratings. You said you wanted to know what people thought of yours.

      I like what I read.

      Thank you.

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      Jennifer 

      4 years ago from New Jersey

      Kathryn you are too kind! But you are correct in that this a place to meet wonderful writers!!! Blessings to you!

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      DDE: My poem has made it half way around the world! How cool is that? Thanks for your comment from beautiful Croatia.

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      Devika Primić 

      4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      He Knows What I Don't - a poem is beautifully written and well shared with great emotions

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Theater girl: I'll tell you what's great about HubPages. You write a poem. Then great followers write comments that are more eloquent than the poem. Look at your comment and the others and tell me I'm wrong. Thanks for adding so much to this work.

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      Jennifer 

      4 years ago from New Jersey

      I love the yin and yang of this piece. The juxtaposition of beauty and danger. Teaching us all to savor when we can, because it can be so fleeting! Great and votes up!

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      RTalloni: And a thought=provoking comment. Thanks.

      T: You are an outstanding follower and don't know how you missed it. My first post-babies poem! It's only a few months old. Maybe there will be more. Who knows?

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      RTalloni 

      4 years ago from the short journey

      Indeed he knows--nicely said! The beauty of nature was/is affected by the fall of man and your poem reminds that though that is so, the birds' instincts were protected in the event that tinged everything for all of time. A thought-provoking little poem you have crafted--thanks!

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      Theresa Ast 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Had I seen this before? It doesn't ring a bell. At any rate, I really, really like it. Beautiful images and then such a wonderful twist, a reality check, t the end. Sharing. Theresa

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Thanks teaches12345! I've had birds galore for the past two days here in Atlanta because of the ice and snow. People forget, we never get just snow. We get ice!

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      Dianna Mendez 

      4 years ago

      We had a hawk perch on our screen enclosure and his attitude was much the same as your words describe. Very nicely said.

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Thanks for your words, till!

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      Mary Craig 

      4 years ago from New York

      The bird lover in me relates to this pretty little bird but your words go way beyond. Loved the photo too.

      Voted up, awesome, and interesting.

    • Kathleen Cochran profile imageAUTHOR

      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Minnetonka Twin: Welcome to my hubs and thanks for your comments. I'm sure you get a look at many varieties we don't see in the south. This week has been particularly cold for us and my feeders have been Grand Central Station. Cardinals and miniature woodpeckers.

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      Linda Rogers 

      4 years ago from Minnesota

      A beautiful poem and photo to accompany it. I just love blue bird's and get a lot of the over here. I also see a lot of Cardinal's. Nice write.

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Faith: The photo was taken at Gibbs Gardens in Cherokee County, Georgia. It is the largest collection of daffodils in the US. Plan a visit for early March - it's worth the trip!

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      pochinuk: " He owns his own blue coat and he ain't gonna let me borrow it for the slightest flit of a click." You've got a poem going there yourself.

      Thanks for the response, folks. That's the real reward.

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      Abba Elijah aka elijagod 

      4 years ago from Abuja - Nigeria

      Hmm !

      Nice poem,it is beautifully and well written.

      Voted up

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      pochinuk 

      4 years ago

      Kathleen,

      "...every lurking threat..."

      Absolutely, again, just yesterday, I thought for sure I could move slowly and "see" the Blue Jay- with Ipod in hand... maybe even get a pic.

      Nope! He owns his own blue coat and he ain't gonna let me borrow it for the slightest flit of a click.

      Splendid action for such a momentary delight that amuses so many of us.

      Voted Up.

      -pochinuk

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      Faith Reaper 

      4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, wow, I loved this poem, especially the surprise ending! Beautifully written and beautiful photo.

      Up and more and sharing.

      Blessings,

      Faith Reaper

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