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He Said, He Had A Surprise...!
We did write a piece, "Have A Surprise For You." But many of our readers and hub friends wanted to hear from her--Thanks Tammy for the follow up idea!. His last words were, " would you take back this man again..?"
We were thinking for two days about an answer from her; and before her saying any word, she was listening to his loving words. She was touched but sad... She had to forced herself from the moment he came back home, but eventually gave in. Let's hear her side of the story. This story is fictitious, but taken from real life events...
Her answer... Video Credits to Atinen26
If men knew...
If men could just figure what is in our minds
things would be so different from the start
I hear your words and your approaching me
my whole body starts to tremble can't you see?
We women can get hurt so easily, I know
Is not the why, where, or simply how
Our emotions are totally independent for our brain
I hear your words and... trying to apologize again
Just enough time to say, "huh huh..!"
You are trying to change 10 years that were not too bad
I fell for the man that was pretty much Mr. Right
I said, "I do," from the bottom of my heart...!
How can I tell you dear 'man of mine'
the one dad and mom thought you were 'fun'
How can I respond to your sincere words
I feel so guilty, so ashamed... I don't know...
I see you crying and holding my hands
our kids are getting older and that kept us as one!
I have to give you an answer for the sake of our own lives
I cry next to you and I wish... how can I explain Oh my!!
I see the throbbing veins in your arms as you hold me tight
"I have to be honest with my own man," said my mind
He is waiting for an answer and I should comply...
I wish I could tell him what was about to happen last night...
I cry out of impotence amd remorse
You came on time, that's for sure
You cleanse my tears and hold my chin up
the sign to reach heaven's gates ... oh God.
We've been on this journey for so long
I just want to tell you that you came on time
You could've lost that woman of your life
We dance to the tune and try to reach the skies
I know you gave me so much and I was almost blind
Life and boredom wanted to bring us apart
you are coming with your heart between your hands
felt those chills from the first time after prom night
Hate myself, feel guilty; you came back home on time...
I could've made a mistake and leave you behind
men don't understand sometimes how do we react
Your tears, and your words got me right back on track
I'm a woman and I should be strong
I kiss you all over and recognize my man
I forgive myself and forget those thoughts of 'one night stand'
My family is first and my kids wonderful kids love dad and mom...
"Yes I do!" That's what he wanted to hear
"Yes I do too" he answers back kissing behind my ear
We ourselves, have saved this family for sure
Love should be given without expecting anything in return...
Yes I do! Yes I do! dancing and kissing until we fall on the floor...
If you want to read his answers...
- Have A Surprise For You
Just imagine... if you were able to look back in your relationship, and see things that are getting out of hand. How could you mend things and put aside selfishness...?