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He Begged For More (limerick)

Updated on February 3, 2016

Each kiss and the man’s mind would gleam

His lips never met such a dream

Each placement he’d plan

Till next taste began

Let’s face it the man loved ice cream


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      Ruchira 21 months ago from United States

      Limericks via you are awesome!!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Nicely done and made me want an ice cream.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      I loved the minty twang in the end.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Ice cream with hot chocolate covered with nuts..Heaven..Loved it..

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      That's excellent. Once a week I have to have Ben and Jerry's Cherry Garcia, so I understand your predicament completely.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Ha Ha - I'm quite sure "ice cream" will become the new tag line for many gentlemen on this site!

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      Verlie Burroughs 5 years ago from Canada

      Silly and fun Mhatter, well done. :)

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      anglnwu 5 years ago

      Haha, what a way to tease the reader--nicely done.

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      Lolz..! Would you rather have the ice cream or the lady? ;-)

      Voted up and funny

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Yeah! I like "Ice Cream" too. LOL

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      Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      You have a way with these !

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      lol, MH, another fun limerick! Enjoyed it...... :)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      mmmmm love ice cream... I love your limerick.. so clever..


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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Yes.The model is legal age.

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Am I just getting older, or do the young ladies just start looking younger? I don't know if this one's legal, her smile is rightly quite regal, cute little smile, need wait a while, must walk away with my beagle. Great Job, mh!

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      That was sweet!

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      Madeleine Salin 5 years ago from Finland

      This was clever. :)

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You can keep your ice cream; I'll take that little lady! Great fun! Have a great weekend my friend!