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Head over heels

Updated on February 28, 2016

To your proud attitude,
i convey gratitude.

my affection too isn't',
any less arrogant.

I can't seize,
being, head over heels.

mad in love, I choke.
yet, i will unlock.

my present state.
I will elaborate,

be beside.
i long, for your side,

I have no aid.
when you're aside.

In your absence,
i am tensed,

such is my state,
what is left to say?

© 2016 Hari Prasad S

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you Devika, and shaloo for your appreciation.

      - hari

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      Devika Primić 17 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Strong emotions here and you share your talent greatly.

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      Shaloo Walia 17 months ago

      Beautifully expressed!

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you manatita. I happy you revisited and commented too. Much love brother.

      - hari

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      manatita44 17 months ago from london

      Mohammed Rafi is one of my favourite devotional singers, and your poetry is exquisite, Bro. Two in one. Awesome!

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you vishnu sir.

      - Hari

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      Vishnu 17 months ago

      Your poem reflects a symbiotic relationship.Cute pain in missing

      the mate!

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you surabhi. Yes you are right. Mohd rafi, RD burman, shammi kapoor were real gems.

      They are Eternal Inspirations for the art form called bollywood.

      - Hari

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      Surabhi Kaura 17 months ago

      This is an exquisite poem, bhaiya! The poem... the song... Shammi ji... and the legend Raafi Sahab... everything! Kya baat hai! Sone pe suhaga :)

      Sometimes, songs inspire me too! I love the romantic side of bollywood and the sweet simplicity that it portrays.

      Busy tomorrow the whole day with shopping and stuff... will catch up soon with your other hubs on Tuesday. Joy and Peace.

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Missy, wow. I am happy I could translate feelings of the character to words.

      :-)

      I am inspired by the song. I could sense the true feelings of the character.

      Nothing personal at all. He he.

      - hari

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      Missy Smith 17 months ago from Florida

      You must be in love. It's a very passionate poem. You long for your lover and I felt that emotion. Nice job, Hari. :)

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you vishnu sir.

      - Hari

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      Vishnu 17 months ago

      When one travels thousands of miles away from the home,he explores himself! You have described our basic urges,Hari....

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Eric,

      did you gift, love, unwrapped,

      receiving love, gift wrapped.?

      :-)

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Wow Eric. I am happy for you friend.

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks for visiting Manatita and for your valuable inputs. Being such a great pal and a follower. :-)

      - Hari

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks Ruby. :-)

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      Eric Dierker 17 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      I like it. To me it shows the head over heels love I am in -- maybe that is just me.

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      manatita44 17 months ago from london

      Beautiful, and exquisite poem. Much passion here. Sweet, charming; to the point.

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      manatita44 17 months ago from london

      Supremely beautiful! Much Love, my Brother.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 17 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Being away from the one you love is a lonely state, Beautiful!