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Updated on March 29, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

The true essence of you

Of myself

Being revealed

Memories come to me

That bring tears to my eyes

My soul is opening up to

A new life

Great things are coming

A part of the old self

Sheds away

Revealing a new strength

Baby skin

Without decay

I feel set free

Flying high up above

To parts I have never seen

Never could've dreamed of

Gentleness overtakes me

Silence is the strength of me

I am becoming whole

Beauty renewed

An esctasy untold

I am taken to this magic place

Unimaginable to my mind

Led by dreams

Fantasies and the like

All I feel is wonder

That in which I am lost

The calm before a storm

The sunrise taking place

Set adrift

Lost in space

Reaching high above me

Watching intense motion

On another plane

Seeing an innocence

Coming back

This is real love

A new terrain

Not something cheap

Full of purity

Full of life

Many mountains high

Many oceans deep


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    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Senoritaa! Wish u well.

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      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Loved it, especially the last two lines.

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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you intriguewriter I would love yo read your poems. You should definitely put them up. Cheers.

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      7 years ago from worldwide

      Beautiful, heartfelt, inspirational. I think I need to put up some of my own poems that I have written. I might do in a few weeks. thank you for the inspiration. Keep up the amazing work!

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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Chris for all of your comments. I am glad you like my poetry. I hope you live your dreams too. :)

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      Chris Achilleos 

      7 years ago

      Beautiful poem Caroline, your words have really touched me. I hope you continue living your life in the direction of your dreams. Thank you for sharing this very meaningful poem. Voted up and beautiful!

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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Hi Blossom thank you for your sweet comments dear lady!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 

      7 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A lovely, gentle poem. May you continue to plumb the heights and depths and write so beautifully about it.

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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Jim. I'm glad you liked it. Until next time.

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      James W. Nelson 

      7 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      A very beautiful poem to end on. I now think I'm caught up with my reading.

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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Hi ImKarn thanks for all your support and great compliment.

      @ Eddy I love reading your poems too. Thanks you. Cheers to u.

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      7 years ago from Wales

      Oh caroline;truly beautiful and full of strength.

      I love your style and here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

      Take care and enjoy your day.


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      Karen Silverman 

      7 years ago

      'baby skin without decay', 'a new strength'. Keep fighting...keep learning..keep evolving. Beautiful!

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Raciniwa for reading and your comment. Have a good day.

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      7 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      love the message imbued in the poem...simply awesome...

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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Rob for your comment and stopping by!

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      7 years ago from Oviedo, FL

      Hi Caoline; Very good introspective look at your growth within. Wonderful imagery. Very well done,


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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Thank you SanneL. :)

      @ Vincent thank you very much for that great compliment. :)

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      Vincent Moore 

      7 years ago

      You indeed are spreading your poetic wings and I admire your creativity. Simply beautiful, you have the gift and I am thankful for your sharing it here with us your followers. Hugs

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      7 years ago from Sweden

      This poem is filled with beauty and tenderness. Just gorgeous! I loved it.

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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Cheryl. :)

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      Cheryl Simonds 

      7 years ago from Connecticut

      Very deep and very beautiful. Always love reading your poems.

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Hi Ruby thank you for reading. Yes, I am trying new things in my poetry. I like to go back and forth from the good and bad in life. LOL.

      @ Hi Billy thanks for the read! I wish you the same. :)

      @ Hi Debbie thank you for the read. Yes I am. I hope for everyone to be.

      @ Gypsy thank you!

      @ Gina thank you for reading! Yes we do.

      @ Stessily thank you for your lovely comment and read. Yes I hope that wholeness for all of us.

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      7 years ago

      caroline, Such a beautifully descriptive journey to wholeness. With my passion for water, I especially love the last line: "Many oceans deep."

      On the journey to wholeness, there's a wonderful point where fear no longer looms and change feels welcoming. It's the turning point where you know that you are on the right path and everything feels like a home stretch. This poem is there! You're there, and as I enjoy this poem I'm there too.

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      Gina Joy Bennett 

      7 years ago

      Wow Caroline! This poem is so beautiful. It's what we all long for. Great job!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      7 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome! Loved it especially that ending many mountains high many oceans deep wonderful.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      7 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow Caroline I love this poem. You are becoming whole. this poem is wonderful.

      voted up way up

      have a wonderful evening


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      Bill Holland 

      7 years ago from Olympia, WA

      The purity of love...this is beautiful and I wish you peace and happiness as you discover your new path.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is beautiful Caroline..I sense a new you in your poetry lately..Best Wishes...

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Prashant for your kind words. :)

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      Prashant angiras 

      7 years ago from shimla(india)

      A beautiful poem i am glad that you are becoming whole,may you be blessed with the love an purity that you desire.


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