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Heartbeat Reminder (poem)

Updated on February 5, 2015

Each heartbeat a reminder loving you

The reason the sun blessed another day

Just ask the flowers they’ll admit it’s true

A scent that heaven is not far away


Each thought of you awakes a melody

The dance of lover kissed by satin light

Just ask the stars their whispers you will see

The dream-lit path that leads my soul to flight


Each maddened moment that we are apart

A lifetime of surrender to the dark

Just ask a tear the secrets of the heart

The Joys of you forever will remark


Each heartbeat a reminder loving this

Each thought awakes a moment that you kiss


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    • aykianink profile image


      6 years ago

      Nice one, M. Good stuff.

      On another note, can you contact me privately? You have me as someone you're following and I'd like to talk to you. Thank you:-)

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      Jessee R 

      6 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      When you are deep in the ocean of love... this is the sort of art that floes..

      Awesome write my friend

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      6 years ago from Orange, Texas

      My favorite line is "Just ask a tear the secrets of the heart" I don't know how you come up with phrases like these, but they're wonderful. Voted up.

    • dghbrh profile image


      6 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      second time i m reading just felt like again going through

      its very beautifully done indeed

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      Sasha Kim 

      6 years ago

      *sigh.... ^_^ Your poetry is lovely! Thank you for writing poems day after day, many of us here on hubpages appreciate it!

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      Karen Silverman 

      6 years ago

      Oh, M...scary to love so deeply! Everything at risk...for eternity..

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      6 years ago from Central Florida

      MadHatter, beautiful poem exemplifiyng the yearning for love. Please know lost love or looking for love in the wrong places does not diminish the beauty of life. Nor does it diminish the search. Be real. If love doesn't pan out the way you dream, keep dreaming and reaching. If and when you've found it, nurture it! Never let it go stale.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Each word deserves a heartbeat. Passing this on.

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      Deb Hirt 

      6 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Ah, the beauty of love!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Aha, Mhatter, You know how to bring back memories like no one before. You are able to open the locked door to enjoy the memory once more..Beautiful..

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      Thomas Silvia 

      6 years ago from Massachusetts

      I like how you tame word into poems, it's what makes the reader enjoying them so much !

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      Devika Primić 

      6 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Most beautifully expressed thanks

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 

      6 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      Tender and so romantic, beautifully done. Voting up and awesome

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      6 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      'Just ask a tear the secrets of the heart....'! Absolutely beautiful! Such a touching poem.... Love it, MH!


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      6 years ago

      This poem plunges into a deep meaning! Beautiful words.


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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      What can I say that I haven't said do such a great job regardless of the genre you write!!! Awesome Job!!!

      Voted Up, Beautiful, and Awesome!!!

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      6 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      hey, you are the real romantic in the core of your heart to ignite romance in every word here. A poem to forget age and time to feel like falling in love again and again. You are shining in this one and thanks for sharing. Up votes and away.

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      Michelle Liew 

      6 years ago from Singapore

      A great poem to be shared with a loved one. You keep outdoing yourself, Hatter.

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      6 years ago

      Awesome & breathtaking poem! Such feeling, such depth, such emotion - wow! Loved it - voted up, awesome & beautiful. Great job!

      God bless!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow MHatter I love it my friend.. I agree with Michele just beautiful.. have a wonderful holiday weekend


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      Michele Travis 

      6 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Beautiful, lovely, and happy.

      Voted up.

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      6 years ago from Kentucky

      Mh -

      The heart trembles at the thought of one so cherished. After 32 years of marriage, reading this is as close as I'll ever get to that again!

      Seriously, you really made this one come alive. I felt like a 16 year old experiencing love for the first time. And, you never forget your first!

      Great Job, my friend. Completely enjoyed!


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