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Heavens Edge...

Updated on August 27, 2013


Golden leaf ..from waters fall

this told me... I had seen it all

From where... doth beauty

of forest lie ..

A waterfall ... that comes

from the sky

Flashing beam.. of liquid delight

grasps my soul ...

and holds it tight

High upon...yon rocky ledge

I was taken to ...

heavens edge

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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..Genna

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      Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Beautful! I love nature, and this is how I feel when I expreince all that it has to offer. Thank you. :-)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Blossom .. I appreciate you coming for a visit .!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Like it! A lovely poem.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Mary .... your words are so kind .. happy you like my poem ..!

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      What a beautiful depiction of what we can see and feel in a waterfall. You've truly put it in words Michael.

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you .. sweethearts.. your words are very sweet also .. glad you like my poetry.!

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      sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      Peace like a waterfall flows from heaven. Beautifully written.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you ..Ben .. visit anytime ..my friend

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      Ben Blackwell 4 years ago

      This is a cool poem. Good job.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you WND.. happy to see you and good to have you as my follower..!

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      What a beauty. Surely enjoyed this.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks for the comment ..Lyricwriter.. yes the Lord is great ..

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for the visit and the comment ..My tender flower .. a Rose is one of the sweetest of flowers in it's beauty and color ..just like you

      Michael

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      Richard Ricky Hale 4 years ago from West Virginia

      Cleaner3, voted up, awesome, and beautiful. It's truly amazing how beautiful the world is. A perfect reminder that these is a higher design, a perfect fitting title my friend.

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      rose-the planner 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

      Absolutely beautiful piece of poetry! Thank you for sharing. (Voted Up) -Rose

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Eddy.. coming from you ..I am humbled .. you have led the way with the courage and tenacity you show ..moving forward in your life .. you are a tremendous role model for all young women to emulate , with your strength of self esteem that all young women can learn from.

      Michael

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh yes truly beautiful Michael; you are indeed so talented and you seem to have moved up a notch lately. Here's to so many more.

      Eddy.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank You ... Nikki ,, love your poetry also ..!

      like me, you have also evolved into a great poet.!

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      Nikki Wicked 4 years ago from Louisiana

      Beautiful!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      an you ..Nancy.. good to see you appreciate my poetry.!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Faith ... glad you like it !

      have a great day ..

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      Nancy Owens 4 years ago from USA

      Very peaceful and well written.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, this is most heavenly and powerful. What a gift you have shared once again. The image is perfect.

      Thank you for this and what a lovely way to start the morning.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless you. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks M hatter .. comments from a great poet as you... are appreciated

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      This really does take you there. Congratulations