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Help !!!!!The Halloween Spirit Strikes In The Morning!!!!

Updated on October 31, 2012
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Rhyme:Early This Morning.

Early this morning

As I sat in my haven.

I saw a rainbow

as high as the heaven.

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What next happened

Filled me with fear

I stifled a scream

No one would hear!!!

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A darkness enveloped

I felt a shiver.

Halloween is tonight

To early to quiver !!!

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Rictameter: Oh Help!!!

Oh Help!!!!!

Please somebody

The dark Halloween ghost!!!

Has caught me as dawn is breaking!!!

My senses locked in a petrified state!!!

Frozen limbs unable to move!!!

Clammy fingers of fear!!

Claw at my heart !!!!

Oh Help!!!


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Acrostic:Halloween Ghost!!!

Help oh please help!!!

A heart wrenching plea!!!

Leaving me in crippling darkness

Lower and lower my heart does sink!!

Oh no what is happening??!!

Where are you all??!!

Every moment my fear swells

Every moment my heart screams out

Never ever felt such eerie clammy bleakness!!

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Ghosts are meant for those story books

Heavy breathing follows my each move!!!

Oh please someone oh please!!!

Stricken into immobile state

Terrified, petrified I sink to the ground !!!!!

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However I managed to move

and face the culprit;

my heartbeat slowing

my limbs again moving!!

Feeling so

foolish

feeling so

daft.

My camera

I'd left in

Negative Effect !!!

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      carol stanley 4 years ago from Arizona

      I love the words and the pictures. Great job and I am really scared and Happy Halloween to you!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So glad you liked this one carol.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Deborah 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      Happy Halloween Eiddwen, beautiful poem and thanks for the holiday gift.,

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      You had me going there Eddy. Great stuff and just in the nick of time! Voted up,

      Jan

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much eHealer your comment is so appreciated.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you also Jnhorner.each and every comment is appreciated.

      Eddy.

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      Hi Eddy, you write some really good hubs always a pleasure to read.

      Jan

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much Janhorner and enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Love it Eddy! Great special effects on the pictures, and as always your words perfectly capture the moment. I'm afraid our little goblins are going to get quite wet tonight, but I'm sure they won't mind too much. :)

      love always,

      billy

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Happy Halloween, your poem was so enjoyable and funny. I have been thinking recently of poetry based children books. Thank you. Jamie

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Great poems had me wondering what's going on over there in Wales.

      I did enjoy your funny work.

      Voted up and Awesome. Happy Halloween, Joyce.

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      Awesome poems. I like the acrostic ghost. Have a freaky Halloween! Voted up funny!

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Great Halloween poem and awesome photos, very awesome !

      Have a safe but spooky Halloween !

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Boo, Scary pictures Boo..Great Halloween poetry..Loved them all..

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Ha! Fantastic! As I was reading through I thought "How creative to provide a spooky view of photo's in negative effect." And at the very end you provided the Halloween trick and treat!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      You are definitely in the spirit of things. Great material!

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      SPOOKtacular in every way... Happy Halloween, eddy!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh How cute.. I love it.. negative effect.. lol.. Eddy my friend.. how are you? I always love to read your poems.. always puts me a good moods.. many blessings to you

      Debbie

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this Halloween treat.

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      You've done it again! Left me spellbound! Oh how I enjoy your poems and pictures! Thank you, Eddy! Voted up+++ and Happy Halloween!

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Eddy, Sincerely a great job all the way through. I was awaiting a "Boo", but the negative effect was much more fun! Loved these!

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      The negatives do give such an eerie effect to the pictures! Great images and poems. An interesting final lines to the acrostic.

      Voted up, interesting.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much Billy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Your comment so appreciated jamie.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you also Joyce.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Your comment so appreciaed lovedoctor.9926

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Glad you enjoyed this one kashmir.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much Ruby.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Your comment is so appreciated shiningirisheyes.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you aviannovice;your comments always appreciated.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much Maria.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So nice to see you've called by Debbie;I hope you had a great Halloween too.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much Mhatter.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Your comment means a great deal btrbell.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you and so glad you liked this one rcrumple.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much rajan.

      Eddy.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      BOO!

      Eddy - you tryly wring every nuance of fright and fear out of halloween!

      Very cool almost-pics!

      I'd say 'happy halloween' but - it seems a tad out of place...

      lol..

      adorable..

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Ha ha ha your writing/comments often have me chuckling away to myself;I hope no-one is looking in through the window !!!! I can just hear the local chinwags "Have you heard that mad woman in number 35???!!!! Ha ha !!

      Enjoy your day my dear friend.

      Eddy.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Eddy, simply wonderful and such a clever use of the negative to evoke the feel of Halloween, I love the poem also. well done.

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      You really wrote an amusing eerie Halloween poem and the negative picture made it look spooky. Thanks for the treat.

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      Jonathan McCloskey 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      Great poems with an amusing and creative ending. Well done.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      LOL!! (cackling along with you..)

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      This is so funny Eddy! You got me cracking up there. Awesome treat just in time though I maybe late...*chuckle*

      Love from the sky~

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Clever and very funny too!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much flashmakeit.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Glad you liked this one jon.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much Cris Sp.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Your comment is so appreciated.

      Eddy.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Delightful and spooky poem. Just right for Halloween.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much Gypsy.

      Eddy.

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      Laura Brown 4 years ago from Barrie, Ontario, Canada

      I like your photos. I added this to my feeds for Halloween (even though Halloween is done for this year) on Scoop.it and Snip.it.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Eddy, this was brilliant! You had me laughing out loud at the ending!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you ever so much That Grrl and I now look forward to reading many more of yours also.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So glad you liked this one bravewarrior.Have a great day.

      Eddy.

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