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Her Beauty Was Really Breathtaking (limerick)

Updated on May 1, 2014

I met a young girl other day

Her beauty took my breath away

My dreams they did soar

As never before

As passed out on floor I did lay


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      Dianna Mendez 3 years ago

      Beauty knocked you for a loop!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Does anyone know CPR???

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Someone call a doctor! LOL.

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India, New Delhi

      Only a poet can show us the real vibrations of this wonderful existence that we call life. Humorously, you have taught us how we should savor beauty. A very beautiful verse. Voted up.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Wow! She must have really been something!

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      Judy Specht 3 years ago from California

      The perfect place to impress someone, the floor. Very Good. Voted up

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      travmaj 3 years ago from australia

      She took your breath away big time..hope she gave you mouth to mouth resuscitation...