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High on a Hill

Updated on August 20, 2012
Bukhansan National Park, Seoul, South Korea
Bukhansan National Park, Seoul, South Korea


There I was ....high on a hill

the air it was ...completly still

the city was... spread far and wide

I looked on down...nowhere to hide

the rocks...the tree's ..the city serene.

the air it smelled.... a certain clean

from way up high.... I touched the sky

I spread my wings .. and tried to fly

the earth it would not... let me go

while it turned and spun... very slow.

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      Princess Prisca 4 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      cleaner3,

      I like it :-)

      You still have much to do,

      Here on this earth...

      Fold down your wings,

      It's not time to go,

      When it's time to fly,

      You will surely know...

      To you,

      From me :-)

      Blessings!

      Ciao...Princess Prisca

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My Lovely Princess, your creative writing has blossomed but you are only scratching the surface of your talent .

      keep going with your rhymes. I like it and I see you are starting to see the possibilities of your talent. :)

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      Princess Prisca 4 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      cleaner3,

      Thank you so much for your awesome and loving comment :-)

      As always, comments from you are an honor and wonderful praise :-)

      Blessings be unto you Michael!

      Ciao...Princess Prisca

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      bluebird 4 years ago

      Awesome picture...and poem!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago

      thank you bluebird.

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Michael, very beautiful, emotional poem. You are always so expressive, the feelings are palpable and overwhelming. Amazing!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      max, thank you ,my awesomme friend

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      Stephen Seth Ulibarri 4 years ago from Albuquerque

      I loved this one. Very cool.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Stephen, thanks for the follow and the visit. hope to read more of your work.

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      Mona Germain 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Wow! I know this feeling!! I love the flow and the soundscape you create.

      I notice a little typo-"completely" and "trees".

      The high vibes are apparent in the voice and content. Thanks for sharing!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Mona, thank you for the comments glad you like my poetry.

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      Plangdon8 4 years ago

      This is an inspiring and powerful poem. It's reminds me of all the amazing things we can do on this earth, and all the adventures we can have. I enjoy being outdoors so I really appreciate your picture. Keep up the good work and thank you for your advice.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Parker Langdon. thank you for reading and leaving a comment .

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Wonderful poem about the nature and the freedom :) It's always a pleasure to read your poems :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you sparrow, your trip through my poetry has brought a big smile to my face :))))

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