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His Dream Girl

Updated on August 9, 2011

Am I dreaming, I feel like I’m sleeping?

He came to me when I was weeping

I was yearning for a hand to extend

He reached out for my hand to lend

He spoke like he came from heaven

I counted my butterflies one through seven

They fluttered around inside with glee

He said I was like a dream girl “ME”

I once thought he would never come

Now I’m hoping two to one we become

Everything feels like if I’m stuck in a dream land

Watching us walk along the water and sand

His hands wrapped around my waist

As we watch the water and see the sun faced

If I am dreaming please I ask don’t wake me

Let me sleep and let me run about and flee

I can’t explain the feeling that comes over

I’m intoxicated with lust and I’m not sober

As we lay faced up on the long green grass

Watching the stars n moon as the clouds pass

Nevertheless this is not a dream this is my reality

I opened my eyes and realized it’s my actuality

He has arrived and I will not let him go

I will hold him under the moonlight glow


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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Absolutey beautiful, great easy reading. Had to voted up

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Writer20, Thank you very much for the vote!!

      bella

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      TheDailyMessenger 5 years ago from Las Vegas, NV

      That was incredible, you have great poetry. keep it up.:-)

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Thedaily, Thanks a bunch for stopping by.

      bella

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      You are such a Romantic Bella. I Loved your line, "I will hold him under the Moonlight Glow". Beautiful Read my friend.

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      TheDailyMessenger 5 years ago from Las Vegas, NV

      Your welcome.

      Wayne.

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Hi B., Thank you very much you know all this time ive been searching for my prince charming well he has arrived on his own without me looking for him yes ma'am all by his self :D

      bella

      Thadaily :D

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      september girl 5 years ago

      This one is superb, bellawritter23! : ) I have really enjoyed this one and the hint at innocense along with your expectations of love.

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      September Girl, Thank you so much thats how i feel this feeling is just so sincere :D....

      bella

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Very beautiful, Bella, and, for you--and I'm glad to say it--very "up" and positive.

      Also, a very lovely profile pic.

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      jfay2011 5 years ago

      Hi, that's a really a nice poem. i used to write poetry. i,ve written a lot about my mother. After she passed away i wrote a lot about her. i'm writing novels now.

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      breakfastpop 5 years ago

      I feel like I should read your work by candlelight with a glass of wine in my hand and my love by my side. Up and beautiful.

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      What a clever title!

      Beautiful poem, lovely style of writing,voting up and beautiful.

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      PenMePretty 5 years ago from Franklin

      Voted: Awesome...It took me some place beautiful. Yesterday I saw the butterflies you wrote about.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Bella!! I hope this is a true write. Yea....

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      So beautiful - you are a complete romantic Bella!

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      distance2010 5 years ago

      a breath of fresh air. intoxicating

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      shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

      Dear Bella! Its a Beautiful Piece of Writing.

      LOVE IT. Thanks for sharing.

      VOTED UP, BEAUTIFUL, AWESOME.:)

      With lots of LOVE

      From SHANAYA:)

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      jami l. pereira 5 years ago

      Voted up and beautiful , brilliantly written once again !

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      5 years ago from East Coast Canada

      Wicked.. tantilizing with the readers own imagery... this is one awesome reverie!!!

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