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His First Newborn Baby Cries

Updated on November 10, 2011


Woke up early morning with a splash of water on his face

Had a sip coffee and ready to work for the day

His wife was still in bed and he left a message next to her

Saying, “Good morning honey, get clean and have some breakfast I made, toast, eggs, and fresh orange juice. I love you”


She had a big smile on her face

After reading his message

And when she was about to eat

Her stomach soon became aching


She couldn’t walk to the phone

So she crawls...

Reach the phone and dial 911

Still on the phone until paramedic arrive


They took her to the hospital

And her husband was told

He rush his way to see her

And there he heard his first newborn baby cries...

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Eiddwen, yes, it is one of the cries that treasure the most. I hope one day I'll get to experience that. :) Thank you

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Oh how I loved this one!!!

      Those very first cries;a sound which I will never forget and treasure forevermore.

      You have written this in a natural and wonderful style.

      Here's to so many more to share.

      Take care and have a wonderful day.

      Eiddwen.

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Gypsy and Ruby, thank you! @Ruby, I believe I will someday! :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Chanroth, What a joy, just wait, you will feel that joy....

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Such a loving poem!

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Sunnie and Raciniwa, yes its one of the most wonderful cry the world can't replace. Yes this poem is very cute! Thank you! :)

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      oh, this poem is so cute...as cute as the baby...

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      Sunnie Day 5 years ago

      One of the most wonderful crys in the world..Thank you for sharing!

      Sunnie