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How I Know You're There

Updated on May 03, 2011
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How I Know You're There

Thank you for shelter
and
thank you for rain...
Thank you for comfort
and
thank you for pain...
Thank you for sunshine
and
thank you for clouds...
Thank you for aloneness
and
thank you for crowds.
Thank you for family
and
thank you for friends...
Thank you for forks in the road
and
for bends...
Thank you for lessons
and
teachers who teach...
Thank you for discomfort
that
compels me to reach...
Thank you for sorrow
that
I recognize joy...
Thank you for love
and
for tools to employ.
Thank you for strength
that
uplifts when I'm weak.
Thank you for hope
when
I'm feeling bleak.
Thank you for being
and
thank you for care...
Life is more precious
because
I know You're there.

"Copyright 2011, All Rights Reserved."

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      Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

      Ah tnderhrt23, lovely poem, sort of soothing and great imagery :-)

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      mum, thank you! Soothing is always good!

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      bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

      Thank you for our sweet Tender', our gift of no compare....

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Thank you for Tnder

      as she is a woman of creativity

      and self worth and self reiance and self motivation

      you are an amazing woman your style oh wait you have no style because you are the style and trend of writing you carry so well and you create magic with your fingertips and mind!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Christina M. Castro 5 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      Instead of reading this I started Singing it!! Do you have a tune for it yet. I do, and I hope you can hear it sometime.

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      bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

      I sooo agree with Bella and Ms.'mum and would love to hear Ms.'Castros tune...

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      I am flattered and humbled by your comments! Thank you kindly, bbnix, bella, CMCastro. This write came during an exercize of gratitude during a low tide of spirit...the light out of the tunnel of self-pity that was threatening to engulf me...I have no reason to complain, absolutely none, and these words were given to show me that. Lots of love!

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      Primpo 5 years ago from Brooklyn, New York

      nice work.. love the poem

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Thank you, primpo! I appreciate your visit!

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      great poem, sending it on :)

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      WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Excellent!

      And thank you both.

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      Xavier Nathan 5 years ago from Isle of Man

      A great application of the law of gratitude. What a brilliant way to create what you want to feel! You taking my job tnderhrt? Thank you.

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      Xavier Nathan 5 years ago from Isle of Man

      ps Could this be the long awaited duet with CM?

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Again, thank you, nighthag!I appreciate your visit!

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      WillStarr, thank you, Sir!

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Spirit Whisperer, nope, not taking your job, my friend, just using your theories to create my reality!

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      lcbenefield 5 years ago from Georgia

      What a beautiful expression of gratitude. Really puts me focused where I need to be. Thanks.

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Thank you, Icbenefield, I appreciate your visit and comment! ~Blessings~

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      Gustave Kilthau 5 years ago from USA

      Hi tnderhrt23 - Well, Ill start off by commenting on the beauty of your thinking and, next, by telling you that you expressied it so well in the poem. Then I thought of my own "blade of grass church" that has no books, no scrolls, no laws - just a command to look out the window at a blade of grass if you doubt there is no higher one who could create things that no human can create.

      Gus :-)))

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful poetry of thank's. I love the picture of the winding walkway.

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      Sharon Smith 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      This was simply beautiful. It has such an effortless flow ~ great writing!

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Gus, I believe I am a member of that same "blade of grass church"...for it is to that theology that I subscribe! Perhaps unofficially, but a member all the same! Thank you, my friend, for your visit and awesome comment! Hugs!

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Ruby, that winding walkway is none other than...the fork in the road! Lots of love to you! Thanks!

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Sharyn's Slant, thank you, kindly! I appreciate your visits and your awesome comment!

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      Fluffy77 5 years ago from Enterprise, OR

      WOW! So, beautiful and inspiring too. Your talent here blows me away as usual. Love you blue bells in the photo too.

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Aww, Fluffy, thanks again! You are sweet!

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