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Not So Secret Admirer, Now!

Updated on July 16, 2013

You don’t know who I am

But I can’t help to notice you.

Your undeniable beauty

Is rare to but a few.

You’re absolutely breathtaking

There are no words for me to say.

The way I feel when I look at you

Just strips my breath away.

I do not have magical eyes

I’m sure the world agrees

The beauty that I see in you

Everyone else sees.

I know you hear it all the time

How terribly stunning you are.

But I can’t bear it anymore

Just watching from afar.

I’ve been secretly admiring you

I’ve known no other way.

Please find it in that heart of yours

To meet with me today?

I know that you are special

And in beauty I cannot compete

But I must be quite handsome

For I am always chased up the street.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Ed,

      Hahaha! Yes, I was the "Class Clown" in my High School yearbook (the only accomplishment in my schooling :-) Not everyone will agree I'm funny, but hey... truth be told, I'd rather be laughing then crying :-)

      If I said you had a beautiful body would you hold it against me... Alright... I made a mental note, to self! :-)

      Thanks Ed, you're a doll, making my day... making my day!

      Cat

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Cat , girlly , how did I miss the fact that you have a wicked sense of humor ! And of course in answer to the Bellamies ! Yes !.......get it, "would you hold it against me?" yes .........:-}

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      You want to talk about who doesn't love who? This is a two-way relationship... but if I doMn't come looking for you... I don't see you! How could you do this to me Michael? How?

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream sure...you just don't love me anymore.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      I've had your blog open for more than a day now. Every time I start reading... oh look a bird!

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream yes indeedy...it is the one and only.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Michael... Michael is that you? I can hardly recognize you. :-0

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @PaoloJpm she does have a way with words...this chick has it going on like the funky cold medina.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      PaoloJpm,

      You like that? ;-)

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine

      Oh, I love your words express in this wonderful poem. But then, suddenly, as I roll down, OOps ! hahah nice hub!

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      mr-veg 4 years ago from Colorado United States

      rightly thought Cat :) You have a wonderful day ahead ;)

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      mr-veg,

      Nice, I like it! I should live by that, it'd probably save me some trouble! :-)

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      mr-veg 4 years ago from Colorado United States

      Well we shouldn't tease silent waters :)

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      I'm just joking, gosh if either of my real brothers found out I was claiming that to be one of them, they'd really disown me! :-)

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      mr-veg 4 years ago from Colorado United States

      ha ha ha... well you took sweet revenge on your brother then :)

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      mr-veg,

      Thank you, would you mind telling my brother? He is still bitter that I plastered his love letter and picture all over the internet.

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      mr-veg 4 years ago from Colorado United States

      Nice one cat and that photo is awesome :D ...

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream it all depends on the person you are dealing with...most people know when enough is enough.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Eh, a lesson learned. I can be my own worst enemy, sometimes I don't know how to recognize when enough is enough until it's more than enough.

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream that's crazy...I'm sorry to hear things are out of control.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Yeah, well there's about 15 comments that didn't make the cut; you wouldn't believe them if you saw them!

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream what the poop is going on here...it's like I walked into a bad episode of Melrose Place.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh my dear sweet Colin, only you can make me blush and laugh at the same time. I am honored simply by your presence but your words are enough to send me into the clouds. I can't believe I didn't recognize the Steve Buscemi/ Tom Cruise connection, how perceptive you are! ;-) Not his best work.

      Enjoy your movie and remember, if it's on DVD then it must be true!

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      I am not 'your' secret admirer, my lovely Cat!

      I am your very public admirer. lol

      You rock my world too as you are a true creative anomaly with a rebel spirit and most importantly, a most unique language all of your very own.

      Love that picture of Steve Buscemi chaneling Tom Cruise. lol

      Sending warm wishes from Colin and his cats at lake erie time ontario canada 7:27pm and now about to watch Dark Zero Thirty on dvd to see if they really did kill Bin Laden (which I doubt) but hey it's a movie, right?

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Okay, I'll stop trying to figure out where the animosity has come from and consider us "good".

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      Don't play, be mad and sad; I'm sure I got it right; sue me! You're still cute, though!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh stop, were you dropped on your head or had a habit of eating paint chips when you were younger? Nobody that I am aware of has said anything negative about you so you have no reason to be down... turn that frown upside down Charlie Brown.

      So where on Earth are you from, or is that top secret?

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      Yeah, right... when I come around the traffic follows; haven't ya noticed!?

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      Not really; it just gets old that I find the perfect EX too many hundreds of miles away!

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      Grandma must be back 'cause I can't comment the way I like without getting deleted!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      What are you starting to get cranky? What are you so bitter 'bout?

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      Okay, the last couple of comments have been "unapproved!" So, uh, no, you are not correct in your statement... Dang, that sounded so gay...

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Aww, now see that was beautiful and may attract or at least not repel other hubbers :-)

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Sorry, had to step out for a moment.

      Aww, you're so sweet! Yes, I will have to stop over at your site, already have it save in my favorites. Um... the next time you stop by you might want to write a nice little wholesome comment as to not scare away the customers? Thanks for making a girls evening and I'll be seeing you. ;-)

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream I know...that happens after a bunch of comments in a short period of time to a hub...just hit "not spam" then it will give you the option to "approve" or "deny".

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Insane Mundane,

      Oh so there isn't some lady sitting behind a computer scream saying "You disgust me... delete"?

      Michael, your comment doesn't say approve or deny it says "not spam" or "delete forever". haha

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream I have a whole woman fetish...I love it all...they are such beautiful and wonderful creatures.

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      It is all how you word it; to hell with those robotic filters that are orchestrated by freakin' nuns!

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream I live closer...maybe not right at the moment...but I will move right next door if it means I get you.

      @Insane Mundane I like it...you're like the 2 Live Crew of Hub Pages.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Ha ha ha, see, you really need to write that Hub part 2. You have quite the expertise on the subject!

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Insane Mundane hey...I called it first...but to be fair we'll do the gentlemanly thing...we'll let her pick.

      @Cantuhearmescream this is totally white-trash...if we were family it would be redneck.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Hey does this situation fit into the redneck or the trailer trash group? Or both? Michael, your thoughts?

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      Hold your horses, Michael... She is not just YOUR girl, she is mine as well... You might want to look at the disclaimers for "community property," while you're at it; ha!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Hahaha, wait you mean like broke as in need fixin' or broke as in you don't have a piss to pot in?

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream you're my girl and all...but just so you know...I'm broke...so no need to tell fibs here young lady.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Ah Michael, you should never withhold any human being from the magic that is your beautiful words! Your words are like that of an angel!

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      @Cantuhearmescream no...not really...no restraining orders for me...I'm too much of a wuss for that.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Sallybea,

      I'm not sure I'd want to meet up in the brightest hours of the day...with a club in my hand! :-)

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Insane,

      I happen to be out in public and I'm pretty sure some people are calling for help after watching me laugh and drool at my phone

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Sallybea,

      Thank you. I'd hope some would share an appreciation for the romantic poem. But I must say the women where you live have to be quite ugly? :-)

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Restraining orders, you're kidding me? What is the matter with people today?

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      Sally Gulbrandsen 4 years ago from Norfolk

      Ha, so I got it wrong then, still would not like to meet it, her, or he on a dark night!!!

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      @Sally: It must be really bad, when you can't even recognize the gender of this, uh, vile creature? LOL!

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      Sally Gulbrandsen 4 years ago from Norfolk

      What a gorgeous image. Wish I had taken that one!! Great Hub Cantuhearmescream I am going to remember that one for a long time. I just hope I don't meet her on a dark night!!! Oh I do love a good laugh!!!

      Bet even her Mum loves her.

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      Michael John Mele 4 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      I never got such a beautiful letter like that...all I got was restraining orders...I'm so sad.

      By the way...love the pic...those eyes...they are so mesmerizing.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      billybuc,

      Thank you for the visit! ...And never hesitate to speak your mind!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Well, Cat, that picture woke me up for sure. My God, girl....there are so many "ugly" jokes that came to me from my youth when I saw that picture. I will refrain from sharing and just say thanks for the laugh this morning.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Insane Mundane,

      Okay, I laughed so hard I cried; I admit it.

      But everyone needs love, even the ugly!

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      Yeah, well, people that look like that should probably keep it a secret!

      Cool, I may start being your non-secret admirer, especially after finding out what my competition looks like; ha!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Insane Mundane,

      I'm so happy to see you this morning :-) !

      Talk about killing your mood; welcome to a day in the life of Cat! These have always been the secret admirers that I have been blessed with throughout my life. Isn't it grand?

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      CJ,

      What's photo-shopped? Thank you... love was in the air and I felt the urge to share! All is well; are you kidding?

      Thanks ;-)

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      Insane Mundane 4 years ago from Earth

      Yikes!

      I've just been bitch-slapped with the ugly stick!

      Well, that photo killed my mood... LOL!

      I should be back to normal in about 30 to 45 minutes, but I'm dimming my monitor until then!

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      CJ Sledgehammer 4 years ago

      Please God...tell me that picture was photo-shopped!!!

      Thanks, Cat, that face will be the last thing I see before going to bed. :0)

      A very delightful poem and one that flowed well from beginning to end.

      I pray all is well in New York and that you are behaving yourself.

      Best wishes, behave, and be well - C.J. Sledgehammer