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How to Write the Perfect Body Paragraph: The Quick and Easy Way

Updated on July 19, 2017
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Stephanie Bradberry is an herbalist, naturopath, and energy healer. Her academic career includes teaching, tutoring, writing and editing.

     If an essay were considered in terms of a sandwich, the top and bottom pieces of bread would be the introduction and conclusion. The actual contents of the sandwich—meat, cheese, lettuce, tomato, etc.—would be the body paragraphs. Just like you would not want your sandwich filled with cheap meat and flavorless products, a teacher does not want paragraphs lacking in substance. Writing a perfect paragraph every time, for any subject, can be quick and easy if you can fill in five predetermined sentences with your own information.

You Need a Main Idea

       Before we can move ahead to make the perfect paragraph, we first have to come up with a main idea to link this paragraph to.  A main idea—also known as a controlling idea, thesis or enthymeme—simply tells the reader what your main argument is.  The most basic main idea includes:

1)      What the subject is

2)      Your opinion about the subject 

Let’s say my teacher wanted me to write about a food that I liked.  My main idea/thesis could be: “Peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are the best.”  (Yes, there is a theme about sandwiches developing here).  The subject is “peanut butter and jelly sandwiches,” and the argument/opinion is “they are the best.”  Now that the thesis is established, the perfect paragraph will make much more sense as it is composed.

Basic Parts of a Paragraph

      A basic paragraph has five standard components/sentences. These parts are:

1) A topic sentence,

2) A concrete detail: example or specific detail,

3) Two sentences of commentary and/or analysis, and

4) A concluding sentence

A topic sentence states what the paragraph will be about. This prepares your reader for what is to come. The concrete detail is an example, quote or paraphrase that supports your point. This information can be from personal experience, a book, or another source. Commentary and analysis explain the importance of the concrete detail. This information helps prove and relate back to your thesis. This is usually when someone would say, “So what?” Tell the reader why this information important? The concluding sentence serves two purposes:

1) To sum up what the paragraph was about

2) Provide a smooth transition into next paragraph.

An Annotated Example Using Peanut Butter and Jelly Sandwiches

     Now, let’s see these parts put into action. Remember, the thesis for the paper is “Peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are the best.” My topic sentence will be: One reason peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are the best is because they are easy to make. Next, I need an example to support my topic sentence and thesis: A peanut butter and jelly sandwich only requires bread, peanut butter, and jelly. Now, commentary and analysis are needed: Virtually any kind of bread can be used that is on hand, and the same is true for the peanut butter and jelly. With a quick smear of peanut butter and jelly on bread, the sandwich is complete. The only thing left is the concluding sentence: The ease with which a peanut butter and jelly sandwich can be made is not the only reason peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are the best. Now the paragraph is complete.

Same Example Without the Commentary

     One reason peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are the best is because they are easy to make. A peanut butter and jelly sandwich only requires bread, peanut butter, and jelly. Virtually any kind of bread can be used that is on hand, and the same is true for the peanut butter and jelly. With a quick smear of peanut butter and jelly on bread, the sandwich is complete. The ease with which a peanut butter and jelly sandwich can be made is not the only reason peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are the best.

So Easy a Child Can Do It

     I have used this same formula, also called the chunk method, starting with elementary students. If composing a whole paragraph about peanut butter and jelly sandwiches was this easy, certainly you can write a perfect paragraph about anything. The best part is this paragraph outline can effortlessly be expanded to include more examples and commentary for papers that require more depth.

Stephanie Bradberry
Stephanie Bradberry

About the Author

Stephanie Bradberry is first and foremost an educator and life-long learner. Her present work is as an herbalist, naturopath, and energy healer. She spent over a decade as a professor of English, Literature, Business and Education and high school English teacher. She is the founder and owner of Naturally Fit & Well, LLC and former owner of Crosby Educational Consulting, LLC. Stephanie loves being a freelance writer and editor on the side.

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    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      4 years ago from New Jersey

      Hello Gruver3,

      Thank you so much for the complements. I really appreciate the feedback and sincerity. This really makes me miss being in the classroom. But feedback like yours keeps the inspiration going. I am so glad that my information and example(s) helped :)

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      Gruver3@yahoo.com 

      4 years ago

      Hello Stephanie,

      I was scrolling through some places trying to help my son to better understand writing skill. There you were. Looked this over applied it and he wrote his essay with some help. We home- school and he has a great teacher but! I just wanted to say, "Thank You."

      This information has really helped my home so very much.

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      5 years ago from New Jersey

      Hello Teresa Schultz,

      Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. I felt like you for a long time. No one ever really said, "Here is how you write a traditional paragraph." But then one of the last years of undergrad my trainer for tutoring broke it down. It changed my life from just hoping and getting A's to knowing what I was doing and why.

      I am glad you found this helpful and can pass this on to your sons.

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      Teresa Schultz 

      5 years ago from East London, in South Africa

      I've either forgotten what I was taught in high school English class, or haven't seen it broken down like this - interesting! When I try to give my teenage sons some writing tips, I generally just tell them not to write such long paragraphs (looks like they could have split it into two or three paragraphs) and that when the "idea" changes, they should start a new paragraph (or when they start writing about something else, or a new part of their story or article.)

      I think the only thing in your hub that I can really relate to is where you say there should be a smooth transition into the next paragraph. I do try and teach my children that.

      A well-written hub, and nicely explained topic; well done!

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      5 years ago from New Jersey

      Hi rasta1. It is so true. I admit I often have trouble with the KISS principle. But I have gotten better over the years.

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      Marvin Parke 

      5 years ago from Jamaica

      As my English teacher would say, stick to basics, keep it as simple as possible.

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      5 years ago from New Jersey

      Thanks, isenhower33. I figured I would pick something that is pretty common to everyone. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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      Bobby Isenhower 

      5 years ago from Crothersville, IN

      Great job, I like sandwhiches lol :) Good hub :)

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      5 years ago from New Jersey

      Hello nightmarejessie54321.

      I guess this sort of writing can be considered a hobby for me. But it is really more of a passion. When I was trying to decide which way my educational career should go while in undergrad, I realized I would be most helpful as an English teacher. The reason was I personally knew how to write a paper but never knew why one paper might be better than another and my feedback was inconsistent. Then I learned The Formula in undergrad and was upset it took that long for someone to tell me one existed for the type of writing we are required to do so often. So I just pass along the information to anyone who is willing to hear! But for some reason my students don't care to hear it from me for the most part, but their friends do. Go figure :)

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      nightmarejessie54321 

      5 years ago

      i love the way you wrote this piece. is this some sort of hobby? anyways keep up the good work because that will make me happy, and i'm really not just speaking for myself here, there are a lot of websites that don't really explain anything and it makes me go insane in the mem brain.

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      6 years ago from New Jersey

      Well thank you. I'm glad you found this helpful :)

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      awesome 

      6 years ago

      I think this is great

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      6 years ago from New Jersey

      Milli, I think being a teacher and life-long student that I am intent on making things as transparent as possible with students in terms of expectations, while still allowing them to learn on their own about creating personal style and a writing voice. But I think many educators just assume someone really taught their current class of students how to write and just jump right in hoping for the best. But of course there are the students who have been taught and simply do not want to use the information to their advantage.

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      Milli Thornton 

      6 years ago

      Crazy. You'd think that, since teachers really want this from their students, they would demystify it upfront. I guess it took a Hubber to see the need for this. :~)

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      6 years ago from New Jersey

      Hello Milli,

      I wish I had this too, but that's why I wrote it to share with everyone. I found writing the perfect paragraph mysterious. But no one broke it down until college, and even then it was a course in how to tutor students.

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      Milli Thornton 

      6 years ago

      Great explanation and examples. If I'd had this Hub to guide me during high school, I might have seen essays as my friend, rather than a grueling exercise in trying to guess what the teacher wanted to read.

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      6 years ago from New Jersey

      Playing around with wording (diction) is a staple in writing. I knew plenty of people in college who were almost too fixated in trying to get the "right" word in their essays. While paying attention to word choice and sentence structure (syntax) are important, I don't think it is worth losing hair over...literally (I knew people who really stressed themselves out).

      I hope these tips are useful in the future for you. Thanks for stopping by!

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      [ Danson Wachira ] 

      6 years ago from Nairobi, Kenya

      Thanks StephanieBCrosby, of late i have found i spend a lot of time re-constructing my wording when writing. Am sure your tips will really help. Voted up and shared.

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      6 years ago from New Jersey

      Writing paragraphs or the article?

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      michelle 

      6 years ago

      it stinks

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      7 years ago from New Jersey

      BlueDinosaur (love the name by the way), thank you so much for writing so nicely about my hub. While I give this same information to students, they tend to ignore it, but if they follow it their grades in my course and their other courses soar. I find most of my analogies lean towards food, the hungrier I am the most complex the analogy.

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      BlueDinosaur 

      7 years ago from Denver, CO

      Well done, Stephanie. I think more people should stop and think before they put pen to paper (or pixels to screen, as it would be), and your guidance would be a perfect place for them to start. And I, too, love PB&J. Great hub.

    • StephanieBCrosby profile imageAUTHOR

      Stephanie Bradberry 

      7 years ago from New Jersey

      Thanks ColibriPhoto. I will have some hubs coming just for you about easy introductions and conclusions. I can't say how soon though.

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      ColibriPhoto 

      7 years ago from Quito, Ecuador

      Nice article Stephanie,You defined it very well. I find the closing paragraph to be the hardest, the opening paragraph second. The body is the easy part, like making a peanut butter and jelly sandwich.

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