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Breaking My Heart - Hurting Haiku

Updated on May 13, 2016

i’m breaking my heart

is it the right thing to do

do it for me please


churning guts and heart

and i the one who said go

on my own again


on hearing your voice

I know it was right so why

do I feel so low


some days are just fine

up and down like a yoyo

hope the string is strong

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      Paper Moon 8 years ago from In the clouds

      I am a big fan of Haiku. Loved this.

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      Russ Baleson 8 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom

      Thanks Larry, much appreciated! (:

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      maven101 8 years ago from Northern Arizona

      Russ....Wonderful use of the 5-7-5 meter...are you sure you don't have a Japanese poet somewhere in your family tree..?

      Thank you for this ...exquisite, my friend...Larry

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      Russ Baleson 8 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom

      Thank you, you too!

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      erin boote 8 years ago from Wilkes Barre, Pennsylvania

      Russ,, that was touching, what a way you have of making others feel what you feel...im finally getting the hang of the hub and wrote a second poem yesterday...keep these heartfelt ones coming..

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      Tony McGregor 8 years ago from South Africa

      Beautiful Russ - you are so good at these! I am rather envious!

      Love and peace

      Tony