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I Could Love You Forever

Updated on December 22, 2010

I Could Love You Forever

I sat & watched the rain,

in the company of his heart,

and though hard to explain,

I suddenly fell apart,

He slept so silent,

I beside his soul,

I tried be quiet,

lock my tears in a black hole,

He did not know, or will he ever?

That at that moment I'd lay with him forever,

My heart it played like an aching drum,

Loving you so strong it simply makes me numb,

I worshipped his bare skin & held it to mine,

Wrapped my heart around him, our bodies in-twinned, 

I kissed him, tears soaked his soft skin,

He did not notice,I hoped he did within,

He slept, he slept, and had not a clue..

So my heart, soul and lips whispered the words "I Love You "

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      Angel_In_Disguise 6 years ago

      Thank you :):)

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      Jessica Brock 6 years ago

      What a beautiful poem. You are very inspiring!

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      Angel_In_Disguise 6 years ago

      thank you

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      Susan Zutautas 6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Beautiful poem.

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      Becky Jo Gibson 6 years ago from Old Town, California

      Nice work dear! I will be keeping up with your progress...I hope you will stop in and read some of my work. Be blessed and good to you.

      Becky Jo

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      kookoo88 6 years ago from Cripple Creek

      Very beautiful

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      Angel_In_Disguise 6 years ago

      Thank you all very much

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      Angel_In_Disguise 6 years ago

      Thank you all very much

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ....so pure and tender are your words my poetic princess - you truly write from that beautiful heart of yours - and in a style much like mine - you write with a simplicity and economy in your words but there is so much depth and that is what makes you profound as a writer!

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      The Rev. Kelechi Timothy Francis 6 years ago from Rivers State, Nigeria

      And he seemed not to be aware of the intensity of your love. Hmmm. Guess what? Keep doing this and I'll dedicate a hub-poem to you.

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      The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      Very sweet... he's a lucky guy and you opened yourself up to love with this one...