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I LOVE YOU TOO: A POEM

Updated on May 7, 2012


Seldom have I felt so animated

Or exuberant as when you said you loved me

My vision swims before me

Waves of delight, I see

Love, I can hardly stand

If my cheeks blush anymore

They’d be scarlet

I can’t breathe for joy

I sit and stand, fumble and fret

I do not know what I say

Or what I do, I just sigh

I sing, I cry, I wish I could die

In your arms to complete this sweet dream

You said, you love me

But me, Love!, I may not survive

The fullest happiness ever to befall me

If I weather the silver words of thy sweet lips

If I survive and be yet alive

The shock of my greatest wish

My deepest love, long enough

I want to say, I love you too.....

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      Sharon Christy 5 years ago from India

      :) Yes... thank you for commenting Gypsy Rose Lee!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. It is wonderful when someone says I love you. Even better if you love them too.

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      Sharon Christy 5 years ago from India

      Oh wow! So glad you liked it and are sharing it! Thank you so much!

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      Sharon Christy 5 years ago from India

      Yup! Thanks aviannovice.

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      Wow

      what a beautiful love poem ! simply breathtaking in its simple truth. Love it..Voting up .. and sharing on :)

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Uh-huh...up and awesome. That's exactly how one feels.

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      Sharon Christy 5 years ago from India

      Thank you docmo!

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      Mohan Kumar 5 years ago from UK

      This is a sweet little poem that captures the immediacy and the emotional reaction to 'I love you'so beautifully. I love the word play, the innocence and the sheer exuberance of being in love. My favorite part of the poem is the visual delight of these lines:

      I can’t breathe for joy

      I sit and stand, fumble and fret

      I do not know what I say

      Or what I do, I just sigh

      I sing, I cry, I wish I could die'

      Well done! Voted up/beautiful!

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      Sharon Christy 5 years ago from India

      So.... wonderful to hear that! Thanks, good morning!

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      Sharon Christy 5 years ago from India

      Yup! It sure does!

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      kennynext 5 years ago from Everywhere

      Love makes us all crazy

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      James Kenny 5 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Absolutely stunning. I loved it. I'm sure the person whom you are writing for, feels exactly the same way. Truly wonderful!