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I Love Thee Sweet

Updated on November 20, 2010

I Love You

 Where did I go wrong,
To you is where I belong,
Loving thee,
Who's loving me,
I seek the growth of memories....

I look into your eyes,
I'm deeply mesmerized,
Can't remember where I'm standing,
Except feel hopelessly in love.

You hold me like your heart,
Tightly in your hand,
Deeply in love with me....
Your such an awesome man.

Written by: Jlono

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Awwww Thank you epigramman :) I'm happy you liked it.

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..well I love thee sweet poetic thoughts which come from your beautiful romantic mind .....

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Thank you very much richtwf! So happy that you stopped in to visit. I agree on "simple" can sometimes be better =-)

      Happy Holidays!

      Romancer

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      richtwf 6 years ago

      Sometimes simple and short is more than enough to express how we feel. I think you did that very well here. Thanks for sharing these thoughts of love.

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Thank you tlmntim9! I'm so happy you liked it. It's just a short poem that I threw together. Thank you for the feed back, Have a great day!

      Romancer

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      tlmntim9 6 years ago

      Great discovery, love your work!

      Tim W

      Tlmntim9

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Thank you Spk100,

      This is my shortest poem. But I liked it. Thought it was pretty good for something short and sweet ;-)

      Romancer

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Thank you Pachuca213 =-)

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      Praveen Kumar 6 years ago from Chennai

      Pretty good.

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      Pachuca213 6 years ago

      very nice!

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