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I Love You... even after "Goodbye"

Updated on August 1, 2016

It tears me up inside to know that I'll never be the one for you.

I'll find some way to understand.
I'll find some way to understand.

the day is slowly dying before my eyes
and darkness unveils the heartaches i have kept
silently creeping into a chaos of nothingness
whispers of love unsaid


how do you define a last hug?
how do you describe a last kiss?
stealing away my everything
that i will surely miss


i have always believed in the word "love"
but now it feels so empty
and plain like a hollow echo
crushing my always broken heart


i can now spell the word "goodbye"
and with the perfect tone
destiny has brought me on this end of line
and i only wish i could find myself a home


i thought that day will be the end of my life
but the love i have for you
keeps me hoping for a better day
even after the "goodbye" that i just know


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you much fivesenses.

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      Leena 4 years ago from new delhi

      Very beautiful and from the heart.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Anan, thank you very very much :)

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      Lovely my dear. Love... the greatest mystery. The greatest sacrifice.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much TToombs08!

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      Terrye Toombs 5 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      A very emotional poem, can definately feel the range of emotions. Nicely done, spy! :) Voted up and more.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Azlan! Hey, nice to see you here again. M stands for the first letter of my name.

      xoxo,M.

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      azlan 5 years ago

      nice hub again,and what does M stand for?

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Yeah Kashmir..long time ago..and the scar will always be there.

      thank you for reading! xoxo,M.

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Your sad words paint a picture of your torn heart has it loses the love it once knew,only to be left with a hurtful goodbye,just because you loved someone more than they ever loved you .

      Vote up and more !!!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hahahaha!, my dear friend Rah..well.. :) if he'll give my heart back, which i doubt.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks much Girishpuri! God bless!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      You won't just give up, won't you spy!

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      very touching and deep, keep writing

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Oh Blaise, your such an angel.. Thank you thank you so much for this extra wonderful message! :)

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      how do you define a last hug?

      how do you describe a last kiss?

      stealing away all my everything

      that i will surely miss

      Oh wow, how could you write like that?! This is so heartfelt yet sad. You painted your pain so beautiful even goodbye won't say bye..

      Voted up!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow Thank you so much Debbie! Really much appreicated.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      This is beautiful.. it is the same question I have been asking..

      voted up

      and sharing

      Debbie

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Helena (love the name..) Thank you so much!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks Jon. Much appreciated :)

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      Helena Mikala 5 years ago

      Beautiful x

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      Jonathan McCloskey 5 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      Quite enjoyable, the people and relationships we have never truly fade away from our hearts. Great poem, voted up.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Lot. Really appreciate this.

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      Lot Rillera 5 years ago from Philippines

      i feel the hurt unknown spy.... just be strong ! lot

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks much mush!

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      Esther Earl 5 years ago

      Voted up...so lovely.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wowthank you so much Jangaplanet. You made me think on your question, i just realized it now.

      Thank you for that very wonderful comment.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Rhyz.

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      A James Rodi 5 years ago

      This poem has touched me deeply. If Love is a Universal emotion, then the pain it often causes is equally Universal. Yet, that only begs the more important question: Why do sad poems of love and loss (any type of loss) bring each of us; the readers, some comfort? There is no true answer to that. I would simply say: While there's a heart in me, They'll always be a part of me. And you have done just that, in such a beautiful way. Voting up :)

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      Rhyz 5 years ago from The Other Dimension of Time

      Very powerful words. i love you, goodbye. the saddest word in the english language.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Anam..Thanks for reading! Very much appreciated.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you very much Joyce! :)

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      anam hasib 5 years ago from lucknow

      that was a nice one..:)

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Great poem as always.

      Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello kj force. Nice to hear from you. such another heartbreak in life. Unending tearing of a broken soul.

      Thank you very much kj.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Dawnrichard,you're such a beauty. Thank you so much, coming from my heart.

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      awesome words..sounds as though you lost someone you loved via death after a long illness or coma where words were not spoken,being unable to finalize your good-bye.

      We must take consideration how short life is..great poem, very sad though...voted up..

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      Dawnrichard 5 years ago

      You are welcome dear and i want to see more from you.

      Dawnrichard

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Dawnrichard..im so thrilled to read your comment, thank you soooo much!

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      Dawnrichard 5 years ago

      Nice,wow,hats off, and an awesome poem.

      Thanks for sharing.

      Dawnrichard

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Rdsparrowriter. :)

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      Sad and beautiful poem. Voted up!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow! Thank you bmcoll3278! Thank you for reading my poem.

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      bmcoll3278 5 years ago from Longmont, Colorado

      Great job as always.Voted up