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I Love the Way You Use Your Blood

Updated on February 25, 2012

I love the way you use your blood, the way

you move when moves are all you’ve got.

Go ahead, move now, stir your glorious bones.

The light will accentuate you, the day will

kneel to you.

Every follicle of the moment will bend to your name, settle

on your skin and release endorphins into every brain


You are a magic trick no man can understand.

You are a soft-spoken enigma that glides

in sugared air.

Each star in the universe gleams

only to try and outdo

your own.

I love the way you use your soul, the way

you smile when smiles are all you’ve got.


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    • baytianna profile image

      baytianna 5 years ago from Ottawa

      Hmm, very well done, though it bares the question of whether such an encounter does use soul in a deeper way than simply personality exchange.

    • raciniwa profile image

      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      so profound, going all the way to the lowest totem of my brain...

    • savanahl profile image

      savanahl 5 years ago

      Very beautiful. I really like the imagery that you use as well as your metaphors. Very nicely done.