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I Put My Head Under Your Feet : A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017


They asked me why I love you

I told them, there is no use for me to answer

They asked me why I chose you

I told them my heart is never chose because it already there no matter where I be

They asked me why I wanted to be with you

But what should I want if your side is the greatest place among all?

They can ask me everything they want to know

About my love for you

About my faith to you

But never, it will make my love become less

Because that is why you made me

Because that is how I want to be

Ya Rabb, I put my head under your feet


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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Abbiz, welcome to my Hub. Thank you very much. I only tried to expressed my feeling. I am glad you like it. ^_^ I will visit you soon, insha Allah. Thank you.

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    abbiz 7 years ago from M-A

    Hi Freya Thanks to join me too :) You have made a nice hub with Beautifully expressed, thanks for sharing :)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Nell. I am glad you like it. :)

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    Nell Rose 7 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, this is beautiful and so very well expressed, I also love the picture of the child, rated up great stuff! cheers nell

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi Chris. Thank you. \^o^/

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sa'ge it is on the middle of the day right now. I hope you have a wonderful day yourself, dear. I will visit your hubs as soon as possible because i am soooo busy right now. :( Aloha Sa'ge.

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    carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    Beautifully expressed, Freya!!

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    Sa`ge 7 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Freya, i do not know if you are night or day, just want to say have a wonderful one which ever it is :) looking forward to reading more from you! love you~ blessings! ~Aloha~

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Lightuponlight, yes. Ameen. :)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Micky, thank you, King Micky. I'll try my best!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sa'ge, I'll try my best to always honest, dear, because I believe being honest is easiest than knitting lies. :) Thank you for reading this, dear.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    cluense, thank you very much, dear. I am glad you like it. ^_^

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    Lightuponlight 7 years ago

    Ameen!!!

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Oh Freya. You do not have writer's block. Let more of this beauty flow out of you. Walk and talk with God, as you already do, and your beauty will flow just like this.

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    Sa`ge 7 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Thumbs up beautiful from your heart. Is all we need Freya, just from the heart, no matter beautiful, ugly, sad or joyful. if from the heart is what is needed! Much love to you bessings too! ~aloha~

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    Katie Luense 7 years ago from Buffalo, NY

    Awesome Hub! I rated it up a notch! Keep on writing!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, dear. I got writer's block. :( Heeeeelp!!!

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    pintails7886 7 years ago from Memphis TN

    great poem Freya. Very nice.