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I Press Rewind In My Mind

Updated on December 11, 2011

Dark, crimson sky

Filled with lightning, thunders and sound of fearful nature cries; wind

Freeze through the warmth of my heart, I cried

My world of happiness has fade

Leaving a big mark of bruise, trial of blood

Tattooed “Pain”

Typing along as my hand shiver, shakes

Pressing each key to make a word

Describing the feeling I felt as of today

Tears flooded my eyes

As I press rewind in my mind

And hear the words of judgment that breaks this heart of mine

Although I let those words flow with the wind

And the line of the river stream

But this pain does never leave

All left in me as of now

Is feeling disdain

Tighten chest, emptiness...distress


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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Gypsy, thank you!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Very expressive.

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi everyone thank you so much for reading and commenting. Happiness will come just take time...thank you! :)

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      kevins blog52 6 years ago from southern Indiana

      Its true the pain may never end in the life we are in, happyness will be agin my frind. That was a great poem Chanroth, Thank you

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      Derdriu 6 years ago

      Chanroth: What a cogent, compelling, concise expression of emotional disappointment as well as of its side and after effects!

      Thank you for sharing, etc.,


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      April 6 years ago from Columbus,Ga

      This is sad, but happiness will bloom again.

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      raciniwa 6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      yeah, i agree with sad...we're hurt because of unmet expectations...

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      Ghaelach 6 years ago

      Morning Chanroth.

      Getting over a heart breaking past takes a little longer than we think.Sad poem.

      LOL Ghaelach