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I Put out My Love

Updated on April 8, 2011

 

I put out my heart on paper

For you to crumple up

I put out my soul in voice

Only for you to turn down the volume

 

I put out my smile on the canvas of my face

For you to watch it fade

I put out my pain in the form of tears

Only to be hidden and dried like cement

 

I put out my love like a rushing, warm colorful energy

You put it in a box and try to lock it

But as you are fumbling for the key

You let it escape and it engulfs you and surrounds you

 

I put out my love and now you return it in full

 

 

The End

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      Carolee Samuda 6 years ago from Jamaica

      I am glad for the happy ending. I like it!

      Cardisa

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      tumblintumblweed 6 years ago

      Beautiful......glad I went hub hopping! I shall return. voted up / beautiful! Thank you,

      Janet

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      Winsome 6 years ago from Southern California by way of Texas

      I liked this Sky. Persistent love can tame more beasts than beauty ever could. =:)

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      Fay Paxton 6 years ago

      Love always wins.

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      Sky321 6 years ago from Canada

      Thank you for reading and your encouraging comments. God bless

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      Susan Ream 6 years ago from Michigan

      Great Poem dear Sky, I know of the story behind the poem and I love the ending. Yes, Love wins. God Bless and Keep you!

      Mekenzie

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      Sun-Girl 6 years ago from Nigeria

      Great article which really fascinated me because i love any hub written on LOVE.

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