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I Saw You Look

Updated on July 24, 2012


I saw you look

you seen me there

if only I could have....

touched your hair.


A smile on your face

your calm and grace

they moved.. you not

you still looked... hot.


To be so close

and not a touch

it was such torture

It was too much


Like a sharp sword

removed from it's sheath

I had to move my heart

before you pierced it deep


Just that moment...

that was all it took.

You were sitting there

And....I Saw You Look.






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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ raci, so good to see you back on the hubs ... missed you greatly . thank you for the comments. 1

      @ bluebird, thank you my little bluebird. hope you are safe and having a happy new year.

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      bluebird 4 years ago

      There you go again, tugging at our heartstrings. Nicely done!

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      oh, Michael...you really know how to pull those strings...i am attached to it at the other end...

      great poem...

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      I'm sorry, Michael..

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      wow, I can't believe my eyes. Dotti commenting on one of my hubs. the world is going to end , take me lord, it is going to snow. unbelievable.!!!

      it's about time !!

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      I love this Michael....very romantic, and touching. You always did have that special way of pulling the heartstrings. Thank you for this

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ max, thanks max. it was akward but you know i got her in the end.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Awe, Michael, what a great way to capture the moment! Amazing =)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      k, thankd for the comments. yes the moment passes before we know it.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      loves awkward dance...so much hope, so much doubt, so much wonder! You are such a romantic, Michael! Where there's life - there's love!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      teaches , thank you for the comments.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Looks mean so much, but often cannot be returned. Great poem on this emotional ride.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you , bluebird glad you liked it!!

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      bluebird 5 years ago

      I liked this Michael. Thank you for sharing. It is brief, but oh so descriptive. Very well done.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine , thanks for the visit

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      KatrineDM 5 years ago

      'Look but don't touch'..what a torture it is.

      Love this poem Michael.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      georgepir, thanks for the visit and the follow. will soon check out your hubs.

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      George 5 years ago from Ohio

      Sounds amazing!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      matt, thanks for the coment

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      Matthew Weese 5 years ago from Auburn

      It was a good read.