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I Say Please

Updated on August 19, 2010
Oil Painting By Charles Bukowski
Oil Painting By Charles Bukowski

Hey you I already yelled at you to stop grinding those damn teeth.

Now I suppose Ill lower my tone and tell you to simply exhale then breath.

And the time calls for us to once and for all stop this starring contest and finally blink

And after the burning of my patience I say to thee open up that mouth and..

Speak those secrets freely so you may instantly and lastly be able to think clearly.

Now to ask of you another request the stopping of your rolling eyes and the hateful gesturing

And to smile honestly towards what one may not fully comprehend entirely

But It will be eventually explained by this tongue of soaked guilt and said mystery

And then the neon black hand will pass the neon white number making way for I to say It is..

Time for you to give away your animosity In place of the tender sweet and loving generosity.

Set up and stop the raising of that beautiful voice to thou and speak clearer and with sincere dignity.

But be! I plea! Be! better than what you seem to see In that neon cream mirror of self destructive imagining

Now then to beg one last time of you with a whimper I say go to our flowers and water them carefully Afterwards give to I your eaten love In exchange for the self’s hellishly undigested neon green eternity.

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      Justine76 8 years ago

      "burning of my patience" I feel that....

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      kimberlyslyrics 8 years ago

      H-E-L-L-O

      J-E-L-L-O

      M-E-L-L-O

      F-E-L-L-O

      okay that is so hard for me to do I do not have the keyboard coordination.

      I still type with 2 fingers [index ones if your interested]

      We need to start next game

      email me when your ready

      xo

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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      T-H-A-N-K Y-O-U

      @ Summer Steward

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      SummerSteward 8 years ago from Duluth MN

      A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!

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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Nice

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      kimberlyslyrics 8 years ago

      btw I'm sorry

      I didn't mean to upset you this much

      to this extent

      really I can be nice

      I say please

      lol

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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      @ Sa`ge

      Glad You Loved

      The Awful Mess.

      And Thank You~

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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      @ Caitlyn Lee

      Very Pleased From

      The Joy You Have Found.

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      Sa`ge 8 years ago from Barefoot Island

      I loved this, you are a awful story teller and poet as you say LOL! great work! ~aloha~

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      Caitlyn Lee 8 years ago from Earth

      this was wonderful

      really enjoyed it!

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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      @ poetlorraine

      As Always Your Encouragement

      Is A Positive.

      Thank You.

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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      @Joshua Kell

      Glad You Think So.

      Now Go And Tell Everyone Else.

      Thanks For Stopping By

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      kimberlyslyrics 8 years ago

      most certainly spoke to me

      in awe

      i saw

      so much more

      than in your words

      you share your perceptions

      most likely clear

      are your answers far too near?

      wonderful my mystery friend

      Kimberly

      xo

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      poetlorraine 8 years ago

      yahoo, and well done

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      Levi Joshua Kell 8 years ago from Arizona

      Sooper cool!

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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You for the

      More than kind comments

      Everyone

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      Sapphire Fisher 8 years ago

      Wow David your writing is starting to change. I loved your before but it's really starting to get to my heart!!! Loves ya David!!!

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      Tara Tufford 8 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

      your writing reminds me of the time when words themselves seem to be more beautiful...I really enjoy reading your work awful-

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      D. Louise 8 years ago

      Time for you to give away your animosity In place of the tender sweet and loving generosity.

      I love this line, the whole poem is great, but this line just does something extra for me.

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      alternate poet 8 years ago

      wow !

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