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I Just See You - A Poem

Updated on November 2, 2014

Sometimes we just need to let those we care about know how we see them.

I See You

I see still the struggle within you.
I see still the pain that can engulf you.
I see still how the negative can affect you.
I see still how much you doubt yourself at times.


I see the wonderful person you are.
I see the person learning from their mistakes.
I see the atonement you are trying to make for the past.
I see the kindness that is taking the place of cruelty.


I see you my friend.
I see the good and the bad.
I see the talent inside of you.
I see the faith you are trying to acquire.


I see not through rose colored glasses.
I see so much more than I will ever let on.
I see you are worthy of more than you give yourself credit for.
I see the peace you are trying to attain.
I just see you.

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      Muris 

      3 years ago

      I appreciate your kind and gureeons advice a lot!. I have been trying it hardly and did not get those amazing results!. It is nice to see that you got my comment in a good way!God bless you!VA:F [1.9.10_1130]please wait VA:F [1.9.10_1130](from 0 votes)

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      Kaylin 

      3 years ago

      I could watch Sclhidner's List and still be happy after reading this.

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      Leslie Schock 

      3 years ago from Tulsa, Oklahoma

      Thank you for the kind comments.

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      Taiwo Kareem 

      3 years ago from Salford

      My pleasure Lewmaxwell. And you are quite right. It gets boring when a poem becomes really long but there are outstanding long poems out there that would rock your emotions to the core. Thats the type im thinking of writing

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      Smarajit Chowdhury 

      3 years ago from Kolkata, India

      Friendship goes through lots of different phases. You've tried to encapsulate those in your Poem in a subtle way. Was a pleasant reading, thanks!

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      Leslie Schock 

      3 years ago from Tulsa, Oklahoma

      Thank you taiwokareem. I feel that usually the most simple of things is usually the best.

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      Leslie Schock 

      3 years ago from Tulsa, Oklahoma

      Thank you MandiGirl. I appreciate that.

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      Taiwo Kareem 

      3 years ago from Salford

      This is nice. Simple, short and beautiful

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      MandiGirl 

      3 years ago from Arkansas

      Very beautiful!

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