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I Trod The Road Alone Today

Updated on May 14, 2011

In Our Time, We Walk This Day Once.

I walked that lonely path today, the path I have trodden in many ways,

For in my head it seems to say, 'Look right into that golden light,'

the one that shines, oh so bright, it lifts our spirit but bows our head,

For all at once we are simply led, in the direction from whence we came,

to rest upon his golden frame.

To gaze from afar whilst wishing on that fallen star,

to shout his name, in truth and delight, without fear well into the night.

His name is God, for those who believe, and for those that don't, remember Eve,

temptress that she was gave woman a bad name,

but cunningness was her middle game.

Now all you young men listen well, for what I shall tell may save you from hell.

Beauty is but only skin deep, brains are forever, and hope to always keep,

Don't be mislead by wanton moves, curvy hips and the ones that grove.

Look instead at the face, the lovingness and the grace, Kind eyes and angelic smile,

more deserved than running those miles.

Only one man knows who serves us dear, one mans destiny filled with fear.

A shinning example of true love, boys don't betray him with foolish pride.

In his heart he reaches out to us, with golden splendour that speaks of love.,

and kindness from the heart he doth say, least all become sinners one day.

Exchange your vows for wedded bliss, but listen to your heart like this,

For Adam was lead astray by Eve, still life's disasters we must heed.

Young men choose wisely in your mate, staying unhappy is such a long date.

Let children be born to those who love, and not live in purgatory least God above

In pure concern call them home, to be protected and not live alone..


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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi justmyopiniontoo thank you for the encouragement, not my best effort at poetry, and I have a long way to go to meet the standards of some of our fantastic talent on hub pages. Welcome to Hub Land, I advise you to go and meet epigramman, saddlerider, Wayne Brown, marcoujor, and all the other great poetical giants that abode here.

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      justmyopiniontoo 6 years ago

      Wow! Amazing!

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      wayseeker 6 years ago from Colorado

      This is an interesting message wrapped in a very musical package. I like the way the words move--and it's always better when they move with truth.

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      Mrs. J. B. 6 years ago from Southern California

      UMMM Hello.... Like I have been e-mailing and e-mailing and poof your gone...What's up???

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      Mrs. J. B. 6 years ago

      Oops I forgot to sign in. Netts: This was so beautiful. Your poems are so deep an dfilled with such emotion that it captures the heart.

      I miss you Girl and know that things right now are hard.. Anytime let me know what I can do to help.\.

      XXX LeeLee

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Cardisa, thank you for leaving me a comment, and especially one so encouraging. I really appreciate your support. x

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hello Colin, where would I be without your loving support. Never change my friend you are a pure diamond, priceless. xx

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi Bill, thank you so much for keeping me inspired. From you my friend I consider that comment to be fine praise indeed. Much love.

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Mysterious One, hello my good friend, thank you for your comment, it is a little different from my poetic rubbish, must just have been my mood yesterday lol

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      Carolee Samuda 6 years ago from Jamaica

      This is awesome advice and well said.

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ...well I'd bite into your apple anyday - because you are a wonderful writer and a beautiful lady - wow!!!!! that's the complete package - and yes you've got it all!

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      WillStarr 6 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Very lyrical and smooth. Well done!

      And the lady with the apple is a very seductive Eve.

      In fact, I think I used to know her. :-)

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      MysteriousOne 6 years ago

      Simply Beautiful, Ms Blue!

      Very nice message,too!

      A rather spiritual write,

      Will guide me safely through the night!

      Voted up/awesome