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I Wish I Were There With You - a Poem

Updated on July 6, 2017

I Wish

I wish I were there

At place where you are right now

To take pain away

I Want


I want to sit there

Next to you so I can hold

Your shaky cold hand


GONE


Your love one is gone

Heart bleeding with tears. Frozen:

Pain seems eternal


UNSPOKEN


You’re Heart is broken

Filling you with memories

Sadness unspoken


HOW?


Here, I feel useless

Helpless, I keep wondering

How you cope with lost?


Silent Tears


I wish I were there

Cover you with my warmness

Wipe your silent tears


Want to Be With You

I want to be there

To that place where you were, Just

Want to be with you


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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Noorenaz dear, love you too! ~ (?? ³?)?~~~?

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ubanichijioke (that name is so hard to remember) thank you very much. \^o^/ yaiy!!!

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    NEHRA 6 years ago from MAURITUS

    Hmm nice i like it.

    love you Freya.

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    Alexander Thandi Ubani 6 years ago from Lagos

    Beautifully expressed words. Awesome!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Maven101: Larry, ah thank you for nice comment. I'm very happy able to give good read as addition for your morning coffe. Thank you. ^^

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    maven101 7 years ago from Northern Arizona

    Sensitive yet powerful haiku forms...each spoke to my heart...thank you for this gift which I unwrapped over my morning coffee...Insha Allah, my friend...Larry

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Stars: Thank you, Stars. God bless you too. ^^

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    stars439 7 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

    Lovely poem from deep in your heart. Very beautiful God Bless You.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Dad. Aww! Thank you very much. ^_^ But I think each one of us have angel-like characteristic inside. It is God's blessing for us. But this world corrupting it little by little and sometimes make this characteristic hidden far from our appearance. For those who still feel grateful to see kindness in others, that is mean this characteristic still dominance in themselves. So I think, all of us are angels in this Earth. ^_^ Thank you, my virtual father.

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    ahorseback 7 years ago

    I believe that epigramman has it right! You are an angel on earth!...

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Daouady: Aww! I'm so sorry. I hope you already feel happy again now. :)

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    daouady 7 years ago from Northeast Ohio

    I read it through the eyes of my mother. My eyes are wet. Thank you.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Awww! Mr. E, you are so sweet! I am blushing now! hehehe... If I am an Angel all should do is to spread my wings and reach my man, but I can't. This duck not even able to jump. Only kwak and writing a poem. LOL. Thank you, Mr. E.

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    epigramman 7 years ago

    ....well your words are so genuine and so sincere - I am quite sure that you must be a visiting poetic angel here on our earth!!!!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Eiddwen: Thank you, Dear. May God bless you too. ^_^

    shegarlynn: Hey, Sis! Thank you for reading this. :)

    prasetio30: You are a great friend. Thank you for your support, Pras. I really appreciating it. ^_^

    akirchner: Hello, Audrey. Thank you, dear. I am glad you like it.

    acaetnna: Hello, dear. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I really like it. :)

    gachapoz: Hi, gachapoz. Your avatar is my favorite Pet! So cute!!! Thank your for reading this. :)

    Neverletitgo: Salam, Abdi. I hope it's true. I really do. Thank you for your support, brother. :)

    Docmo: Ah, you are so nice! Thank you, docmo. \^o^/

    katrinasui: Hello, Katrina. Thank you, dear.

    DavePrice: Ah, my pleasure, Sir. I am so happy if my works can give great feeling to reader. Thank you. ^_^

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    DavePrice 7 years ago from Sugar Grove, Ill

    Thank you for wrapping my heart in the warmth of love, for blessing my day and giving me joy. You are the dearest heart, and I am blessed.

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    katrinasui 7 years ago

    very nice. Keep it up.

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    Mohan Kumar 7 years ago from UK

    Beautifully done. Gorgeous pictures add to the magic of your words.

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    Abdinasir Aden 7 years ago from Minneapolis, MN

    What a nice haiku with beautiful pictures! Freya, your journey brought you to the right direction to be poetry so you can turn any direction you need. Please keep up to follow your dream and never stop. I voted up and useful. Well done sister and Thanks for sharing.

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    gachapoz 7 years ago

    Beautiful! I found the pictures suited the poem really well, keep writing! :)

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    acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

    This is so beautiful, actually totally stunning. I loved the words and the awesome pictures. Great choice of song to accompany your hub too. Voting up and pressing your tabs.

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    Audrey Kirchner 7 years ago from Washington

    Absolutely lovely - and the pics really add to the beauty!

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    prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

    My dear friend, you are very talented. I liked how you choose many words become a beautiful poem like this though it looks pain. But keep on writing. I'll be the man who always support you. Cheers....

    Prasetio

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    shegarlynn 7 years ago from United States

    Lovely poem.

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    Eiddwen 7 years ago from Wales

    Beautiful words Freya.

    Take care and God Bless.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Sord. May Allah bless you to, brother. :)

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    sord87 7 years ago

    I wish i were there too,God bless you Freya!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Agusfanani: Thank you, brother. ^_^

    Micky Dee: I am glad if my words can give something good to your heart, dear. Insha Allah, Allah bless us all.

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    I felt like someone wanted to ease my pain and worries. This spoke to me today. God bless you dear Freya. Be safe. I hope Allah will bless your steps, always.

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    agusfanani 7 years ago from Indonesia

    Very beautiful poem Freya, I wish I were too.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Cracknutcase and profsear : Thank you very much! ^_^

    ahorseback :You are so kind. Thank you. It feels so real because it is real, my dear one just lost his loved one and I can't be there to help him. So sad. :(

    Becky Puetz and kathryn1000: Thank you very much. :)

    Wayne Brown: Aww! That is really nice comment for my works. Thank you very much, Sir. :)

    Minnetonka Twin: Haiku always give me toothache! LOL. It is hard to make so I am really happy when I get great response. Thank you very much, dear. :)

    sofs: Thank you, Sofs. Your comments mean a lot for me. Thank you. ^_^

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    sofs 7 years ago

    Beautiful! The pain of not being able to help is something so deeply felt, the imagery is so wonderful. I loved it!

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    Linda Rogers 7 years ago from Minnesota

    Oh -how I feel the pain and love and loss.

    I like how you structured the Haikus and included pictures to help accentuate the words.

    Lovely and Brilliant:)

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    Wayne Brown 7 years ago from Texas

    Freya...I think this is your best work yet. The mix of words and imagery...all so beautiful and so well constructed...Bravo! Great Job! WB

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    kathryn1000 7 years ago from London

    Very deep and beautiful.

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    Becky 7 years ago from Oklahoma

    Just beautiful, very deep. I feel your pain and loss.

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    ahorseback 7 years ago

    Freya my dear girl , you just wrote the perfect poem , for a moment I thought it was for me! , Thats how real it is. Excellent writing.ox

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    profsear 7 years ago

    Nice Poetry

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    Cracknutcase 7 years ago from India,bangalore

    Beautiful :) Voted up...

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