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I Watched The Moon

Updated on June 19, 2013


There I sat alone....

like a small cartoon..

for some strange reason ...

I was staring at the moon


The night was soft

the pole was still

i wanted to jump

but it was against my will


All I thought about was

these nine lives of mine

The loves I had lost

What was left of my time


Back home i went

and i saw my son...

So scared of life

nowhere could he run


He hid under his hat

peeking out.. just to see

scared to live life now

no love would come.. from he


I went looking for love

and lost some lives... you see

I thought... I was a big cat

but was just...... a kitty



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      Angela Brummer 4 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

      You are a kitty! LOL I enjoyed this very much! You are really good at poetry!

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      Scarface1300 4 years ago

      Hello my friend.

      What a lovely little poem.

      Loved the lyrics and the pics.

      Voted up and Awesome

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Angela, thanks for the comments. yes, i admit it I'm just a kitty. ..LOL

      @ hello, my friend , glad to see you back. thanks for the comments.

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      Lena Kovadlo 4 years ago from Staten Island, NY

      I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Lena, thank you for the comments.

      glad you like my work.

      michael

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      Lisa Williams 4 years ago

      This is a great poem! I believe that there is a time in everyone's life that they realize that they are not the big cat..just the kitty =) I voted up!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Lisa, thank you for the comments. Roar !!!!! oops, Meow.!!!! nice kitty.

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      Mary 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

      Oh I loved this...a lover of cats( well mine anyway) your cat picture got me!! so cute & poetic...

      Up & awesome...cheers

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      delightful piece

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      Cathy 4 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

      I absolutely adore the writing and the images. That first image is proof that a cow didn't jump over the moon after all. Very sweet poem. Thanks.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @carter, thank you for the comments.

      @hatter, thanks , you have become a loyal follower. thanks

      @ ytsenoh, thanks for the kind comments.

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      Hubert Williams 4 years ago

      Very nice Michael. I like it.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Hubert. just experimenting with some stuff. Meow....

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      Hubert Williams 4 years ago

      I experimented with stuff in my youth and wound up barking at the moon on cloudy nights.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      ha, ha, . I know what you mean. !!

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      This is very profound in its simple statement. Those other nine lives lost brought you to the only one that counts.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      teaches , thank you for the comments.

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      bluebird 4 years ago

      Sweet! Loved it all. The pictures were precious! And went so well with it all. Good job. Thanks!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      blubird, thank you for the comments. your follow is appreciated.!!

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      Karasu77 4 years ago from Australia

      I love the way you captured the sense that a kitten was talking, my favorite part was:

      'I went looking for love

      and lost some lives... you see

      I thought... I was a big cat

      but was just...... a kitty'

      And you earn extra kudos for the pictures!

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      The sweetest thing! Oh, how I love this one =) Heart warming poem, charming!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @Karasu, thanks for the comments.

      @Max, my good friend. thanks for your kind words.

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      shalini sharan 4 years ago from Delhi

      nice poem

      loved it

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      shalini, thank you for the comments.

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      oh, this is so cute Michael, straight from a kitten's perspective...

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      raci, thank you for your kind words.

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