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I Wish! I were a flower. . .

Updated on July 3, 2012

Flowers are very beautiful.


I wish! I were a flower

With tender twigs and

Have some thorn me.

I wish! I fetched every eye towards me

My soft petals were kissed

And praised, gave a gentle taste.

My fragrance sweeten the air

And spread thousands of miles

In the forest, in the city

In the mountain and

In the plain,

Everywhere without any

Change; removes

The boundaries and

Make the fragmented earth one.

My aroma relieved

The tension, the pain,

The agony, the misery;

And bring happiness of everybody

I become the sign of love, affection and dedication

And grow everybody’s door.

I wish, I were hold with love

And not crushed.

But if crushed,

My fragrance

Sweeten those little hands

And make them aware

Value of Creator!


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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 4 years ago from India

      Thanks Kamlesh g

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      Kamalesh050 4 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      What an Excellent poem ! Must read some of your other hubs soon. Voted Up & Awesome. Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 4 years ago from India

      Thanks Kenja for ur kind visit and comment.

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      Ken Taub 4 years ago from Long Island, NY

      You are a flower Anu.

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Thanks for your kind visit and comment.

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Beautifully expressed, loved it and voted up.

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Thanks

      Archana

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      Orion

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      daisyjae 5 years ago from Canada

      Beautiful poem. It would be nice to be as pretty and admired as a flower.

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      archana srivastav 5 years ago

      Beautiful poem with lovely thoughts.

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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      I definitely voted way up.

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Thanks Vinaya

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Anupama,

      you have used flower metaphor wonderfully.

      PS: Thanks for reading and commenting on my hub about Lumbini.

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Thanks ChristyWrites.

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      Christy Birmingham 5 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      What a creative approach to life! You would make a great flower :)

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Thanks Katrine DM

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      KatrineDM 5 years ago

      I like it, very imaginative...

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Thanks for giving your precious comment harliquinn.

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      harliquinn 5 years ago

      Wonderful poem. I love the way you use nature in your descriptions, it adds so much beauty.