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I am Invinsible

Updated on November 3, 2011

I can’t speak

I can’t hear

I’m scared

I’m tired

And no body cares

I try to speak but no one can hear me

I want to be loved

But no body love me

I need help

My heart is bleeding

My hands is shaking

I’m freezing to death

But no body can see me

I’m dying but no one knows

I’m all alone

I’m all alone

I’m screaming for help

I want to live

I try to reach your hands

But it felt so cold

I don’t understand

Why no body cares

I don’t understand why no body love me

All I want is to be loved

I walked alone in the dark

I can’t see anything except for my shadow

My shadow is the only one who will never leave me


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    • mondkill profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Yes you are right about that Asma... It's hard to find a true friend now a days...

    • asmaiftikhar profile image


      7 years ago from Pakistan

      Thats the fact that your shadow is the only fair friend on this earth .

    • mondkill profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      @ epigramman - hey thanks again, your words is so encouraging. I like to write poems and at the same time I'm free to express my self in every poems I write.

    • epigramman profile image


      7 years ago

      ...well you definitely have a gift my friend for expressing yourself in very direct and emotional way - you seem to know exactly the right words to use - and often as you know in poetry, less is better, and certainly you have perfected that very well ......lake erie time ontario canada 8:30pm

    • mondkill profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Okay, Thanks for the instruction Derdiru. I'll try to to make poem everday for the contest. Yes I WIll let you know, thansk again.

      This really answer my question.

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      7 years ago

      Mondkill: Just click on "contest" from the options listed at the top right corner of the screen, above the search option and your photo and name: sign in/out, start a new hub, my account, contest, my profile, help.

      Good luck, and please let me know if this gets your creative entries in!


      P.S. Remember that you can enter every day through November 22nd.

    • mondkill profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Hi and thank you for visiting here Derdriu, I don't now how to join poem contest? I like to but I don't know how to join. Can you kindly tell me.

      Have a nice day.

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      7 years ago

      Mondkill: Such an exquisite poem both linguistically and metrically! Isn't there a creative writing/poetry contest this month? If so, have you thought of entering this?

      Thank you for sharing, voted up, etc.,


    • nenytridiana profile image


      7 years ago from Probolinggo - Jawa Timur - Indonesia

      So sad! Sometime I feel like a ghost, no one care. Lonely, sad, pain... yes it was so cold. I was like invisible in the crowded place. I was trying to get some attention, but they seemed busy. I asked for their love, they didn't seem have one. I have ever thought to end my life just to get their attantion. I pray that no one of us will be in that situation again. I hope we can avoid any situation like that. Thank you mondkill! Good luck!

    • mondkill profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      @Sannel, thanks for your beautiful comment, your right about that it takes courage to face the truth.

      God bless and have a wonderful day.

    • SanneL profile image


      7 years ago from Sweden

      Such a captivating poem that reflects the mental state when its at it lowest. When you feel so much sadness, hopelessness and unhappiness its very difficult to see anything around you except for the dark shadows. It takes a very strong person to get through this state of mind and it seems that you are one of them.

      Thank you for sharing this very beautiful poem with us.

      Take care my dear,


    • mondkill profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Hi and nice to meet you Happyboomernurse... Yes I found the light and it took me years to find it. For some moment I lose my soul, my heart, my personality.

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      Gail Sobotkin 

      7 years ago from South Carolina

      Beautiful but sad poem about feeling alone and unloved. I'm guessing from your comment to abradford that you have found a light at the end of the tunnel. I suspect most people who read this poem will be able to relate to the feelings expressed in it and hopefully most will have already found their light.

    • mondkill profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      @ abradford55: Yes there is always light at the end, you just need to find it... Thanks for stopping by here and thank you for commenting. have a wonderful day!

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      Adam Bradford 

      7 years ago from Howell,MI

      wow that was really powerful, a great expresion of emotion. Sadly ive been in that place as well and its difficult to deal with, but there is always light at the end.


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