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Next time maybe it's free ........poem

Updated on July 25, 2014

Maybe it was the signs given off by any
slight of hand
Or the escalating of animosity provided
along the beach and the sand

Happiness has it's own plan so
too the realms of gods
Bliss in a relationship is fleeting yet
what were the odds

If all you can do is criticize and
Let me say I would have waited for free at
the open gate

I've been here before and I just realized
my mistake
I've always known what life could give
and what it'll take

A suggestion

Go ....go now as you have threatened
much before
Yet when you so begin again......
begin by not keeping score

Love is but one awesome and all
encompassing chance
Too bad though I just never saw the
reason or rhyme of learning your dance


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    • Faith Reaper profile image

      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, it seems when one is always so critical of the other loved one, that is a sign the person does not love herself/himself and, therefore, it is tough to truly love another ... as one should be loved.

      Powerful poem here ... convicting

      Up +++ and away

      Blessings always

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      Demas W Jasper 3 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      There is Puppy Love, Summer Romance, Romantic Love, Fleeting Love, and Mature Love. Each is different, and only one is lasting. Mature need not mean "old" but it is the Mature Love which lasts.

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      shanmarie 3 years ago

      :'( It's hard to be human and love. Even in non-romantic relationships.