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I don't know them

Updated on February 10, 2010

Viscious brutal full of spite

I am wrong they are right

Ripping tearing lips on blood

Swirling screeching they throw their mud

I don’t know them they know me

Gore and carnage their reverie

The blood they taste no longer me

When its over their all alone

The bones they chew become their own

Outward eye they see fine

Inward eye always blind

In the end your always free

I don’t know them they know me

copyright 2010


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      peptalk 7 years ago

      I wouldn't say nonsense!

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      lovely..... it is a learning curve alright but you are doing really well, keep going

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      lovely..... it is a learning curve alright but you are doing really well, keep going

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      horsecrazyheidi 7 years ago from good old Arkansas

      nice work wish I had the talent

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      Renee S 7 years ago from Virginia

      Nice poem.

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      Thanks! :)

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      Lecie 7 years ago

      you're a great writer. keep the poems coming.

      have fun and be creative

      lecie

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      Thank you...I would disagree but...thanks for reading my poems!

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      TrixieGator 7 years ago

      ~this is very nice~

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      Very good....I was feeling the anguish as you put it..I don't know them they know me..what a world we live in...

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      Thanks Trixie! Thanks sunshiney31...you are so right...t is amazing the joy people receive from destroying others!

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      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      ...haha..this is really cool! if I got it right-this really happens, "I don't know them they know me" (esp. the gossipers or habitual talkers?)...maybe they had nothing to do with their lives...hope they will get tired and stop terrorizing someone's private life.. :)

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      thanks for reading! yup you have it right, people that dont even know me feel like they need to trash talk...oh well...in the end it hurts them...thanks~~

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      wrenfrost56 7 years ago from U.K.

      A simple piece with a strong emotional emphasis, I thought this was a great poem.

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      Thank you very much wrenfrost! Have a great day

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      Shari 7 years ago from New York, NY

      mah nistanah ? 'I dont know them' is a great hub that I really enjoyed. . and that is why this night is different from any other night ;)

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      Awww, your so sweet! Thank you for reading it. Next time someone tells me to have a happy easter I am going to ask them to thank me for easter instead!

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