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Turn to Black

Updated on May 2, 2012


A broken heart... what did i do ?

just like the sky... I am blue

it's to late.... to say come back

My bright world... has turned to black

no more colors... all is dark

where is my light.. where is my spark?

I must go on.. there's no turning back

try to fix my heart...try to fill the cracks..

Oh my love...what did i do?

I never, never, never meant

to put a hurt on you..


i will always love you

just know this..

I will always long...

for your kiss

now i face... a long dark fright

only with your picture

to help me make it through

this nightmare night.


Love you Always...

Michael

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      Sweet poem :)

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      Katrine Dal Monte 5 years ago

      Sometimes a wrong word or action which we may not realize as wrong at the time may hurt the other person.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      sparrow, thank you for you support. it is always welcome

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      A sad kind of honesty in this poem, Michael!

      "a long dark fright..." - nice expression. Hope all's well!

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      Lisa 5 years ago from Tennessee

      So sorry for your pain, although it made for a beautiful poem! Awesome work and I felt every word!(((hugs)))

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Voronwe, thank you for the comment.

      like i have heard from many, i wear my heart on my sleeve sometimes it gets stuck in my mouth.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Lisa, thank you Lisa,your support is so good for my ego and of course the hugs.!!!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is hauntingly beautiful. I hope she gives you another chance.....

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ruby, when it happens the best thing to do is express it, so it will come from the heart. Saying I forgive you, is harder sometimes than saying I'm sorry.

      thanks ruby.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Even if it's sad, it so much beautiful and sincere! I hope you'll have your Sunshine back, Michael, it's just like some dark clouds passing by but the Sun is always there!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      max, max, max,thank you for your support. I will be alright. I have all my supporters.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Michael...you sweet, tender hearted man! I still adore you, if that counts for anything...great poem - but so sad!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      K, thanks K,you know that I love you, i have missed you. It's about time you came to see me just cause you went to florida and have o new love now. LOL i know you were thinking of me

      love Ya,

      Michael

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      SanneL 5 years ago from Sweden

      Michael, what a moving and passionate poem. But so very sad and I hope you'll be okay. Hugs to you from me,

      Sannel

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks sanne, you always brighten my day. you are so sweet to worry about little me. i am sad because you and epi are having a thing, you know i love you.!!! LOL

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      True Love is so divine Michael isn't it. Its seldom in time when I find a fellow man longing and lost in love with unexplained madness, Swings which no other can understand!

      I do! 'cause I have loved madly... fell down in love madly, lost .. resurfaced and found it again.... I share the pain you have my friend... If you ever feel like talking... please honor me!

      Beautiful poetry! Gem of a soul

      Hat's off!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      rahul, yes... the game of love has deep holes that many have fell into. The eternal question of why do we keep on doing it is the something no one can answer.

      I only talk through my poetry, but if you ever need me to write something that expresses what you and i have felt before, let me know for I have been in and out of love many times my friend. "A broken heart", I know thee well.

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Vulnerable and wounded. Your heart has many scars. Don't try so hard, and maybe true love will light on you like a butterfly. Don't chase it, it will fly away.

      Good poetry comes from broken hearts. So do sad songs.

      Votes up.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ann, my LOVELY, lets get together and make a hit song. I will write the lyrics and you do the rest, we will become famous and then go on tour and star on Leno.

      What do you say.?

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Beautiful poem! You're a true romantic.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you gorgeous Caroline. you say the sweetest words.

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Be ready at seven.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I await with baited breath and the anticipation of your aura to enjoy, is making me shake right now. i feel like a schoolboy after sending a note to a sweetheart in my class. please don't make me wait to long for my heart is on the line.

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