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I love the girl

Updated on April 18, 2013

I love the girl
Just my age
Little bit shorter
laughy chasey fun
no drama queens
were my cup of tea
Nor stripteasers my gaiety
I love the girl
lightly moves
Toes ground nimbly touch
Like a butterfly excults
faces and blows minds
I love the girl
when sleeping tight staying close
under the sheets
while the world passes by
slowly dying.


Ps.Is there any body out there? a wink from James;)

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Tijani,

      hahaha well, that remains to be seen or rather heard : )

      Oh, now, that is a nice idea, as I was thinking of some kind of music in the background, and with a nice soft instrumental ... might work. Thank you for remembering that my son plays the guitar.

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      I am excited to hear your southern accent :)I think it would be fantastic if you do it while your son plays his guitar :)

      Hugs,Tijani

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Tijani aka James...

      I see "Calgon, take me away" is back on your page, so I shall have a good read : ) and comment.

      Oh, wow, an audio poem! So that means I can hear your ... as you commented once that your ex said you have a "beautiful" accent : ) Well, I will have no choice but to hear such "beautiful" accent. I have not done a recipe hub, and I am thinking of doing a video recipe hub, and so one can hear my "southern" accent ... yikes, cover your ears lol First, I have to learn how to upload a video to YouTube to do so, from what I understand.

      Hugs and blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      Thanks for your visits. I appreciate that and I am glad Galgon made you smile lol.

      I published an audio poem:) Check my latest write .

      Many blessings to you too.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Love this delightful read...really touches the heart. I came over to your side of HP Town to read about the Calgon taking you away, but alas, it must have wandered away or went down the drain? I clicked on it the other morning, and it made me smile, just like this write did.

      Up and more and sharing

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Theater girl,

      Thanks so much for taking time out to read and leave your insight here.I really appreciate that.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Phil,

      You are funny lol I like your sense of humor :d Just keep your fingers crossed for me..One day someone somehow will fall in the hole that I dug :)

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      So very sweet and lovely! Great job!

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      James I am going to have to give you the speech about using your poetic powers responsibly. You can't just go around all willy nilly and flirt with your poetry. You're going to wind up with stalkers. LOL

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Yes ,whats meant to be will always find its way!

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      That's so true. Can't cage the things you love have to let them decided to stay.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      I know what you mean.Just enough time,long is not advisable, moreover,as they say if you love something set it free if it comes back its yours if not it was never meant to be.

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      I know but given time they turn into just a sting that bother's you now and then instead of a big gaping wound.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @orange skys.I understand that.You are lucky.You succeeded to carry him as a good memory,unlike me as a unpleasant memory ,something I wish to be erased from my mind.What she did is unforgivable .She really screwed up my life,maybe one day I would be able to forgive her.Really emotional scars lasts forever SIGH

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      I understand that. I still carry one of my ex's with me as well but I've learn to put him in one part of my heart so the rest of it could move on. Not sure if I'm explaining this right. I love the man I'm with now but there's one small piece of my heart that will always be my ex's no matter what and we've been apart nearly 6yrs now. From time to time I'll look at his picture or listen to a song that was ours. I'll get one of really good memories of us stuck in my head or sometimes just his face. Not as often anymore but it still happens.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      For me,It has been four years since we broke up. As life goes on, and we go in and out of relationships, I like to believe that we leave a little piece of ourselves with that person, and they leave a little piece with us, sometimes its a bigger or smaller piece depending on how the relationship was. Unfortunately that is my problem, i continue to hold onto these pieces and put myself through hell by listening to our song, going places we used to go, watching our shows... listening to music that makes me cry. Silly things, I know! I tried many times to forget her by getting in new relationships but i failed because i was guilty of being with them even though i never loved them..I am bad ..I know.. but believe me ..dee inside I am not like that and i was never like that.. .So that,I stopped getting in relationships or in any friend with benefits relationships.

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      LoL I know what it like to take the time you need to heal. for me It was a little over a year. plus about 2 months before I said yes to the guy. Just show them your sweet and silly side when you're ready and they'll fall for you. And if not then they weren't the type of girl you'd want anyways.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @orange skys.Good for you and poor me :( lol somewhere along the line I knew there'd be girls, visions, everything; somewhere along the line the pearl would be handed to me hahaha anyway,It seems you took my previous comment seriously .I was joking .I already had none hahaha Right now I am not looking .I am still hurt from my last relationship sigh

      I am happy for you and wish you too all the best :)

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      LoL think I already found the one. After a ton of heartache, but maybe that way needed. So I could truly appreciate who I have now. Anyways keep looking and don't give up she out there somewhere. Good luck. wishing you all the best.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @orange skys.Thanks for the visit and comment.I am glad you liked it.So are you the One Out There ? ? lol jk

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      This is such a sweet poem and a little silly with the p.s. Great poem

      Up & beautiful.

      :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ rdsparrowriter.Thanks for the visit and comment.I am glad it made you smile lol

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      This is very sweet and cute.. made me smile :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @wayne barrett.Yes very true lolThanks for the visit and comment.

      Have a nice weekend!

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Very nice, James. There is nothing like finding your sweetheart!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Oh Isaac Thanks for you trust.I am glad you like it..Yes encore lol..Still have others up my sleeve lol

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      TDM 4 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      Yo Wayne,

      nice work. nice work and an encore. especially the P.S. i voted up even before completing the poem. again, well written.

      I. White

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks My friend.I will do the best that I can to make them always bright and shine on us!:)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      hey james .. keep writing them love poems .. they always bright en my thoughts .. love conquers all !

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Oh Welcome my dear friend.I think it s still morning there .If it is ,so good morning:) Thanks so much for reading my hubs all the time.I really appreciate that.

      You can call me Tijani if you want and have no problems with James hehe

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Hello dear one.. i am here. Reading your sweet loving poem. She must be very special.. like this wonderful poem.

      Deb