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I see myself so incomplete without you!!

Updated on November 20, 2011

I see a smiling you!!

I see a smiling you,

I see a happy me,

Memories are refurbished

Every time my eyes are shut;

Effortlessly I’m flown into,

Thy imperishable grandeur of past;

I see a saucepan lit,

I see tea mingling with milk;

Cup poured in with all love,

A sip driving me to JANNAT;

No matter how often coaxed,

The cup prior was undeniably best;

Filtered again, each time I yearned;

I see double the care,

I see double the affection!!

I see MARIGOLD lavished in platter,

I see lips dipped in big girlie jar;

With eye fluttering around,

I see crave for GOODDAY instead;

A little praise of your efforts,

A little promise for those unending desires;

All I know, done out of love;

I see a baby cuddle me,

I see a satisfied me;

I see a pampered you,

I see a corrupt you;

Nothing soothed you,

A bunch of rose wasn’t enough,

Every time you were annoyed,

Chockalott box hardly could makeup;

For the deeds I committed,

Even teddies failed to reprieve;

I see a clever you,

I see a helpless me;

I see a child in you!

I see a child in you,

I see a doll in you;

Tears failing to stop,

Until I promised to shop;

To hold the last purchase,

That your fingers failed to grip;

I see a blushing you,

I see a demanding you;

I see newspaper being hurled,

I see TV being switched off;

Every time I fail to acknowledge,

A mesmerizing beauty by my side;

Reminisces of past,

Are still vivid and clear;

I see an enchanting you

I see an astray me

I see a pretty nose,

I see an inviting lip;

A head resting on my chest,

Hairs untied; embracing me whole,

‘E Rooo’ – A little whisper in no light,

Crashing extra deep into me,

Every time I invaded your tiny nose;

I see a secure you,

I see a complete me;

I see myself so incomplete without you!!!!

I see an anguish you,

I see a worried you;

Every time I missed on meal,

Every time I ignored your call,

Though never intended to hurt you,

Still falling sort of words to comfort you;

Bizarre, the way you forgave me;

I see an adorable you,

I see a sweetheart you;

I see a lost me,

I see a gloomy me;

Memoirs are relived,

Every time I close my eyes;

I see you cramped into me,

I see me engulfing you tight;

Never wanting let you disappear,

Vanish for ever; leaving me lone,

I see a weeping me,

I see a crying me;

Every time I close my eyes……..

Every time I shut my eyes………

Every time sweetheart…………..

Every time……………………….

I see myself so incomplete without you!!!!

U & ME!!!

I conclude...

A little effort of me....for I could try to relive those unforgettable past....with the so unforgettable lady of my life.... :)

Thanks for reading guys...!!!


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    • prashantpujan profile image

      Prashant 6 years ago from Mumbai, India

      thank you ruchira for boosting my efforts. smile!

    • Ruchira profile image

      Ruchira 6 years ago from United States

      Beautiful words used to express your love.

      nicely done indeed!

      Voted up as beautiful.

    • prashantpujan profile image

      Prashant 6 years ago from Mumbai, India

      thanks Rosemay for your sweet words!!

    • Rosemay50 profile image

      Rosemary Sadler 6 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Welcome to hubpages. a very expressive passionate and emotional poem.

    • prashantpujan profile image

      Prashant 6 years ago from Mumbai, India

      thanks shampa :)

    • shampa sadhya profile image

      Shampa Sadhya 6 years ago from NEW DELHI, INDIA

      Voted up and absolutely beautiful. Very nicely written with a clear expression through words.

    • prashantpujan profile image

      Prashant 6 years ago from Mumbai, India

      Thanks sofs for your encouraging comments :)

    • sofs profile image

      sofs 6 years ago

      Young love... well expressed... passionate and touching! Welcome to Hubpages!

    • Vinaya Ghimire profile image

      Vinaya Ghimire 6 years ago from Nepal

      Emotions becomes intense with every lines. The love and longing is very beautiful in your poem.

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      JR Krishna 6 years ago from India

      You used the vocabulary so carefully to bring out a beautiful expression. Voted up.


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