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I see you see me

Updated on February 10, 2010

A story of envy....

I see you with smiles and glee

Watching you wishing me

Knowing its inside here

Beneath this pile of pain and fear
Trapped to see inside of me

I see you seeing me


copyright 2010

Watching you wishing me

I be you you be me

Now that I am you and you are me

Its plain to see what is true

Watching me wishing you

If I were you I'd wish for me

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      myownworld 7 years ago from uk

      great ode to 'envy'! Really liked this! Now add pics...(just google 'pictures of envy' and then choose the image and download to your computer; then edit hub, add photo capsule, move it up through arrows at the appropriate place and vola!)

      Anyway, keep writing...you're doing great so far! :)

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      Renee S 7 years ago from Virginia

      Liked this. Hope to read more of your prose and poetry. Best wishes.

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      whiteorchids 7 years ago from Tropical Paradise

      Your Prose' is great, looking forward to reading more hubs.

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      Thank you very much. I also am looking forward to reading more of your work

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      Peg Cole 7 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      Loved it Mordechai. Speaks to me of greener grass. Keep on writing. You've got a great start.

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      Thanks Peg I appreciate the encouragement!

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      donna bamford 7 years ago from Canada

      Not bad. Not bad at all!

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      :) Thanks!

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      R. Brady Frost 6 years ago from Somewhere Between a Dream and Memory

      Awesome, Mordechai! Looking forward to reading more!

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      MordechaiZoltan 6 years ago

      Thank you very much Brady, I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

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