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I set your heart free

Updated on August 6, 2013


I set you free

yes... you know

it was me

My heart went with you

yes ..you know

this is true

Now an empty hole...

is where my soul...

used to be

that wonderful night

when I...set you free

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      So sad but beautiful.Even if it s short,It speaks volumes.I feel your pain.I hope one day the hole will be filled with someone better than the one who walked out.

      Hugs

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      I hope you find more peace soon! But you expressed that empty feeling quite well. And I believe some good can come out of pain. Always.

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      With this poem....I almost felt I am set free.....the flow is awesome and very intense...now my soul is empty ....thank you for this one...deep yet very touchy. Votes up and shared.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank You ..James... my friend.. I am happy that you feel my pain .. if you know what I mean ..!

      glad it got to you ..

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Theatre girl.. I am happy you feel that way ..

      I felt so peaceful after I wrote this .. it was awesome..!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      dghbrh... thank you for the kind comment .. glad you like this poem and the experience....

      loved your last poem...

      great comment ..

      Michael

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      Martin Kloess 3 years ago from San Francisco

      Remarkable piece. It is alive. It changes. thank you

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      martin ..thanks for the comment ..

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      rdsparrowriter 3 years ago

      Beautiful and sad. Sometimes writing do wonders and it's a gift God has given to release our inner thoughts. Hope you'll be filled with His love and peace :) Take care Michael :)

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank You Rochelle ..

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      It's not very long, but it's just right as you say so much so well. Blessings.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Blossom.. your comments are appreciated

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      Sparklea 3 years ago from Upstate New York

      Short, simple and beautiful...LOVE the accompanying picture. Setting someone free is one of the hardest things to do, but I think the end result is inner peace...and, as I've heard many times, if its meant to be if you set it free, it may come back to you. Blessings, Sparklea :)

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Sparklea ... you are beautiful outwardly and within ...your tender heart ..

      thank you for the very kind comment .

      Yes words that show inner feelings are hard to write .. but very uplifting with the release of emotions .

      Bless you Sparklea.

      Michael

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Your words express much without the use of many. I am reminded of that song by Sting where he sings that if you love someone, set them free, and then if the love is true, it will come back to you.

      Very lovely poem and one can sense the pain in setting another one free. It is a hard thing to do, but most likely the best if one is not sure of the other one's love for you in return. Excellent imagery too.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Have a lovely weekend,

      Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Faith ..

      if you love someone

      and the love is true ..

      set them free ..

      if they come back to you

      you will have a heart ..

      that never to part

      because my love for thee

      it will always be ..!

      Michael

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      brittney 3 years ago from lost in my own minds lines

      Absolutely beautiful my friend, short and sweet yet to the point. Im sorry for the lengthy time ive been away.i just published two new poem/songs , id highly appreciate your feed back.

      have a wonderful day

      your friend

      Zay

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