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I, the profferer!

Updated on June 26, 2015

Closed I my contemplating eyes

to gauge my concentrated life;

oh! stand I here

at this instance

in the threshold of many a heart

willing to give me a lift


also few itching to give up on me;

my unwarranted words


unguaranteed actions

had been instrumental

in ecxiting mixed reactions

at the receiving end;

giver that I am

I take not responsibility

for your intentional



quips and responses;

life’s stimulus

has made me offer

whatever I have so far


you may be pleased

to proceed with counters

at your own whims and fancies!


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    • Larry Rankin profile image

      Larry Rankin 23 months ago from Oklahoma

      Another interesting poem.

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      Lee Cloak 23 months ago

      An interesting piece and very enjoyable to read, Lee

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      Mary Craig 23 months ago from New York

      So, who's to blame? You or the other person's thoughts of you? Definitely something to think about here.

      Voted up and interesting.

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      John Hansen 23 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi Sujaya, "interesting" seems to be the common comment about this poem. I like it. Even though we believe in what we say and write we have no control over how others perceive it or react.

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      sujaya venkatesh 23 months ago

      'both' Til

      tnq Til Lee Jo Lar for interestingly keeping up my spirit

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