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I Woke up Naked That Night

Updated on July 24, 2012


A Bad dream.... a Nightmare

It gave me such a fright

thats when... I Woke up

Naked That Night


The moon shone... full

the stars... were so bright

I don't remember... what happened

until the break... of daylight


We got drunk....

then we made love

on the car... while the owls,

sat and hooted far above


I know we had fun

It all fell in line

so we will be... together

until the end of time


Now we sit together with...

our small family so tight

And try to remember what happened...

When I Woke Up Naked That Night









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      Matthew Weese 4 years ago from Auburn

      That is something else...hey; ya gotta a family out of the night....lol

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      KatrineDM 4 years ago

      Awesome, a great ending following the night not remembered so well :-)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine , thanks for the comments. just having some fun with my poetry.!! glad you liked it .

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      Voted this up and awesome because I know it will evoke memories in lots of people...maybe not the exact same circumstances but memories of their youth and how their relationship started..."it all fell in line"... Well done.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you, Tillie, your right about the memories although for most it did not result in the same ending. LOL

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      b. Malin 4 years ago

      Ah, I Love this Poem Cleaner...the memories, we all share and wonder, what Happened...Expressed so Beautifully by you.

      Voted UP!

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Ha! Must have been really awkward moment =)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ b, thank you for the comments

      @max, you kooky bird. only until we were ready to go at it again.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ...sometimes, Michael, it's all about that opening line or that title - and that title is to die for ...... love the idea of reading this and being swept away by the cinema in my mind as your words take me to a time and a place with your evocative words ......it reads like a dream, these words, and it's a dream to read these words ..... lake erie time ontario canada 4:51am with Muddy Waters live from London , oh my ......

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you sir, your comments are always appreciated. sounds like you are having a great time .. be safe !!

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