I SAW THE BROOK SO FULL
I saw the brook so full~
Flowing down all frothy white~
I saw the brook so full~
As I drove by it was quite a sight!
I saw the rocks the water bounced off of~
I saw the moss fleecy green~
Wet with lichens growing near~
As well as in the stream.
I saw the water moving swift~
As it traveled fast down the hill~
I saw the rush of the water~
Nothing in it was still.
I saw a multitude of colors~
As the water hurried on by~
There was navy, white, and grey greens~
As the water sprinted high.
I saw the leaves~
Caught in the current~
Orange, yellow, with pinks~
As the water hastened in its endurance~
Before my eye could blink.
I saw the flash~
Of the water as it glimmered~
As it tore through the gutter of rocks~
This liquid it was apparent~
Never intended to stop!
I saw the brook so full~
Flowing down all frothy white~
I saw the brook so full~
As I drove by it was quite a sight!
By
Lisa J. Warner
AKA
Lisa Luv
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Comments
WaW! simply WAW..
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Mandar Sal Thank you so much!
Beautiful poem Lisa. Reminds me of my childhood. I have always loved rivers and little streams, used to spend hours sitting at their banks, watching all the beauty and the beautiful creatures in it....
Well done Lisa...you are an awesome writer, with so much creative thoughts xx
Anything to do with rivers, streams, water I just love and this was beautiful.
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livingsta and acaetnna what a joy it was to see you both visited. Thank you for the high compliments...Blessings to you both..
Great poem which paints a magical scene, like the photos you have shown.
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Thank You Ginger Meow I always get a big smile on my face when you visit. You are a delight also.. Thank You for your kind words....PEACE & LIGHT,
Lisa
saw the leaves~
Caught in the current~
Orange, yellow, with pinks~
As the water hastened in its endurance~
Before my eye could blink
Oh so beautiful Lisa and as always voted up and shared onto A Brand New Dawn.
Here's to wishing you a great weekend.
Eddy.
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Thank You so much Eiddwen ....I wish you a wonderful weekend too!!!
Awesome! Loved it!
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Thank you blondey....It was fun to see and also fun to write!
Beautiful poem that carried me along a path of memories. Love the heart you have Lisa... love the way you share it with others...
Hugs and Blessings from Canada
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Oh ---Thank You so very much Rolly A Chabot! You are a blessing!
Hey when you have time...show off some of your talent on CREATIVE WORLD! Love You!
This poem is most definitely flowing with awesomeness, and I loved the imagery it detailed, so serene, so natural, and I just really enjoyed reading it. Thumbs up high on this one Lisa, thanks for the positive vibes and for sharing your talent with us all. Bravo on doing such a wonderful job!
Sharing activated ;)
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CloudExplorer Oh Thank You so very much for all your kind words..What a wonderful review to here first thing on Sunday morning... I do hope you have an awesome Sunday!
Lisa this is a work of art my friend.. many blessings to you dear one..
Debbie
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Thank you Dear Deborah Brooks...LOVE YA!!!
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