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I Heard Them Calling (tanka)

Updated on January 31, 2015

I heard them calling

Amid kisses of a dream

Of a star-swept night

Lost forevers in your arms

Memories waiting to be


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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Awesome and beautiful.

      Voted up ++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Very sweet. I can't hear them, not tonight anyway.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99...you heard them calling...I saw them....loved it...

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Martin, astonishingly vivid images straight from the heart.

      This tanka is so alive, it has its own vital signs!!

      Great work-------

      Thanks,

      DJ.

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      Joanne M Olivieri 4 years ago

      Memories waiting to be - I LOVE that. Well done. Voted up

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      That sure says it all, Marin, just like a love letter.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      This is another one I had to read twice to get where you're going. It's about beginning. I like it!

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very pretty.

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      This, Martin, is exquisite. Those are the best...the ones we have not yet experienced.

      Voted up++++

      Sending Angels to you this evening :) ps

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just lovely.

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      I love this and I voted it up and beautiful.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Ahh, youth - such optimism...

      Beautiful..

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