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If Just If

Updated on September 3, 2012



Oh how wonderful it would be


To live in a world


Where the people united in faith


And let God guide them day by day



A world where there’d be peace


And smiles given freely


Where helping hands are extended


And people loving one another



No wars and no terrorism


No ill will none at all


People standing tall in their faith


Loving God like they should



The angels cried to Heaven


While the clouds stormed above


While the rain fell hard


Because they discovered the world was so cruel



The angels cried to Heaven


To discover that the world’s people


Were not living according to God’s word


They cried and cried and fell into despair



While God above


Held watch over his children


The angels continued to cry


Because it hurt them to see how wrong things were



They stopped crying on the day the sun came out


On the day when people started believing


And God up above smiled and nodded


That now everyone was united






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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Most beautiful words.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Now I'm singing "Imagine" by John Lennon! Great hub, wonderful message, oh, if only it were so!

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      ExperienceNow 4 years ago

      Your wonderful poem reminds me of John Lennon's eternal IMAGINE. Like this poem very much for its honest sincerity. Voted up.

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      Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Beautiful Gypsy, I have thought and felt the same things!

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Wouldn't it be nice. A dream as long as greed is a human weekness, but still, wouldn't it be nice. I'm dreaming with you, Rasma! Great Poem!

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      Amy Becherer 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      We are on the same page, Gypsy. I published one last night that carries a similar message. We are in a self-created mess today. God help us. Love your peace!

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      Helen Murphy Howell 4 years ago from Fife, Scotland

      A beautiful poem that can only have come from your pen Gypsy! How often have so many of us longed for a world such as you describe. Some days we seem to be getting further away from the ideal that you describe. But on other days, the simplest of things happen, and belief is restored - that maybe one day?

      Beautiful, awesome + voted up + shared!

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      Joseph De Cross 4 years ago

      Wonderfully done Rasma, the flow just took me above cloud nine and I saw the angels pleading to our creator, to give us more time to mend our wicked ways. We have a heart and it beats everyday reminding us that there is ebginning and an end to all. God bless you for these wonderful words!

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      Terrye Toombs 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      Lovely, gypsy and a very beautiful message.

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      The Frog Prince 4 years ago from Arlington, TX

      Nicely done Gypsy!

      TFP

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Well done. Thank you.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this wetnosedogs. Too bad it can't be so wish it could. God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Glad I got you singing Bill. It was a rock cliff that inspired me hence the song Rock of Ages. God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this ExperienceNow and thanks for the vote. A long walk and a rock cliff inspired me and that was why this choice of song. Yes, it was Lennon's dream too. God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Mark. If it would happen the world would be finally at peace. God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you're dreaming along rcrumple. Great it would be. God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad we agree Amy. If and more ifs. Let's hope for a brighter future. God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Seeker7 and thanks for the vote and share. Yes, I am so tired of this world's anger. God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Lord. Sometimes I get so tired of all the bad things going on in the world. Saw the beauty about while walking and a rock cliff inspired this. God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Terri wish I could send this message around the world. God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Glad you enjoyed this Frog Prince perhaps someday.... God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Mhatter and God bless.

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      bishopkmb 4 years ago from Maryland

      Amen, Gypsy! I agree! Beautiful poem!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      this was indeed a hand and hand walk with inspiration.. voted up :)

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      i adore your faith and passion, Rasma! Your optimism has balanced me this morning. Thank you, my friend! sharing, tweeting, voting..

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      aykianink 4 years ago

      Angels crying. Powerful image. I liked your poem.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Glad you enjoyed this Bishop. A perfect world that would be.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Frank and thanks for the vote. Sort of like a dreamlike inspiration for a world that would be great if it could exist.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Leslie and that it made your morning. Thanks for the vote. tweet and share.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this aykianink.

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      Gypsy, how I wish the world was as you penned. Life would be so beautiful.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you agree Rajan. That would be perfect world.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      gypsy my friend this is so beautiful my friend.. sharing on prayer request page and posting on the hub I am writing

      Debbie

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Debbie. God bless. Thanks for the share.

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Gypsy

      Your words are beautiful and inspirational and spoke to my heart.

      Voted up and away

      Take care :)

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      Mohan Kumar 4 years ago from UK

      Truly inspirational plea for unity in diversity, love among humanity and a prayer for peace. Well done Gypsy Rose. May your words bloom forever.

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      melbelle 4 years ago from Southern United States

      very inspiring. If only...but one day it will be so.

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      Sunnie Day 4 years ago

      Such an inspirational piece my friend..Such beautiful thoughts.

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      You live your words, which makes you both beautiful indeed.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Sueswan and thanks for the vote.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Docmo. My inspirational quest for a better world for one and all.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this melbelle and I sure hope you're right.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Sunnie. Some thoughts on what could improve this world.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Thanks so much for your comment Maria. Hugs.

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      Rolly A Chabot 4 years ago from Alberta Canada

      Hi Gypsy... was thinking about this very thing today while I was standing in the river in my waders and fishing. Oh it would be so peaceful if we all could love... there will be a day...

      Hugs from Canada

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So glad you enjoyed this Rolly and oh, yes what a wonderful world it would be then. Perhaps one day. Hope you caught some great fish. Hugs to you and Quigley.

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