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If You Leave: A Poem

Updated on April 19, 2013
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If you leave,

Paint all the sunsets with the color of my eyes,

So you won't forget me when you gaze upon the sky,


If you leave,

Don't let the ocean wipe away my footprint,

So you'll be left with a memory, a melancholy hint,


If you leave,

May the tears you cry be sweetened with delight,

Mingled with healing, making your stoic eyes bright.


If you leave,

Carry on with quiet independence,

Knowing that what once was wasn't intended.


If you leave,

Keep me close in your soul,

Just return my fragile heart you swiftly stole.


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    • Ebower profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin Bower 

      5 years ago from Georgia

      btrbell: Thanks for sharing!

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      Randi Benlulu 

      5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Beautiful poem. Very meaningful! Up beautiful and awesome! Thank you for sharing!

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      Laura Schneider 

      5 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

      Awesome poem, Ebower! There's not a dry eye in the audience by the end, I'm sure. What a grown-up way of leave-taking: giving the person permission to leave and still remember the good you had together without pain, while getting your own heart back so that you can do the same. A+ in my grade book! Thanks for sharing such an intimate-sounding poem.

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      Erin Bower 

      5 years ago from Georgia

      ahorseback: Thank you for your beautiful words. :)

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      ahorseback 

      5 years ago

      Wow , there is a longing magic in these words, exellent ++++.....Ed

    • Ebower profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin Bower 

      5 years ago from Georgia

      Amicgood: Thanks for reading! :)

      carter06: Thanks so much! I could only hope that all of my poems are deemed worthy of such words. Thanks for sharing!

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      Mary 

      5 years ago from Cronulla NSW

      Wow great poem Erin..emotive and beautifully heart tugging expressive..

      VUAB & shared

    • Ebower profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin Bower 

      5 years ago from Georgia

      Poetic Fool: Thank you for your lovely, encouraging words. :)

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      Poetic Fool 

      5 years ago

      Erin, your poem is wistful and bittersweet with a real sense of honesty. Genuine is the word I think I'm looking for. Well written and it pulls on the heartstrings. Thanks for sharing it!

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      Erin Bower 

      5 years ago from Georgia

      Sunny River: Thank you! I think melancholy is an excellent word for it.

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      Sunny River 

      5 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

      I like the melancholy feel of this piece. Just lovely.

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      Erin Bower 

      5 years ago from Georgia

      lambservant: Thank you with a capital T.

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      Lori Colbo 

      5 years ago from Pacific Northwest

      Lovely with a captial L.

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      Erin Bower 

      5 years ago from Georgia

      Mhatter99: Thank you!

      cleaner3: Thanks so much. I love writing heart-felt poetry. :)

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      cleaner3 

      5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      great poem ...Ebower.. you write with a style like my own and it serves you well .! expression from the heart ...

      michael

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      Martin Kloess 

      5 years ago from San Francisco

      Such remarkable sweetness. thank you

    • Ebower profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin Bower 

      5 years ago from Georgia

      blondey: That was very nice of you to say, but I'm sure yours are wonderful! Thanks for reading. :)

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      Blondey Hubpages 

      5 years ago

      wow, well written poem here. Puts my hubs to shame! Great poetry! :)

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