ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel
  • »
  • Books, Literature, and Writing

If You Were a Girl

Updated on September 21, 2017

If you were a girl

you could know that sometimes the meaning of a goodbye is don't go away

If you were a girl

you could know that a hairpin in the car is an inducement

If you were a girl

you could know that the sweetest strokes are on the hair

If you were a girl

you could know that a Disney movie isn't just a movie

If you were a girl

you could know that good night and good morning aren't just words, but promises

If you were a girl

you could know that an eternal love story might be hidden in a song

If you were a girl

you could know something more

Have you ever thought to be somebody else?

See results

© 2012 Lorenzo27


    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • tobusiness profile image

      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Beautiful and very interesting... Voted up.

    • raciniwa profile image

      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      i love being a girl but i really can't get away with jealousy...awesome...

    • BlossomSB profile image

      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      I enjoyed the poem, especially as it is a girl speaking but written by a guy, usually I seem to read ones that are the other way around. I thought you handled it very well.

    • suzzycue profile image

      Susan Britton 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      I enjoyed the line good morning and good night are promises. I never realized that before. Well done. Great poem about a girl from a guy's point of view.

    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Interesting thoughts....

    • time2rite profile image

      time2rite 5 years ago from Navarre, Fl, USA

      A very beautiful write, Lorenzo. It's amazing how little acts speak volumes more than mere words alone!

    • mary615 profile image

      Mary Hyatt 5 years ago from Florida

      Very nicely done!

    • xstatic profile image

      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Nice list and interesting idea here. Up!

    • andsoforth profile image

      andsoforth 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Very very nice, Lorenzo. I quite like it.

    • wonderful1 profile image

      Sheila Varga Szabo 5 years ago from Southern California

      Inspiring and beautiful. I like the symbols you used.