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In Love With Love That Doesn't Exist

Updated on April 19, 2013

I can see her anytime.

But night-time is best.

It’s the nightly visits,

That suggest I am blessed.


So quietly, she slips,

In and out of my bed,

Becoming the loveliest figure,

Inside my head.


My clouded visions,

Are permanently etched,

With distinct outlines,

Perfectly sketched.


Her vision returns,

To persistently insist,

That her form and charm,

I can never resist.


Overpoweringly suggestive,

She’s seductive, persuasive,

Explicitly expressive,

Consumptive, and submissive.


Consistent fulfillment,

Ardent endearment…

She empowers me to be,

All and only what she isn’t.


But her kiss is a kiss,

That is utter bliss,

Engulfing, captivating,

Impossible to dismiss.


She’s so real to feel.

She’s so easily kissed.

I’m spell-bound to a love,

That doesn’t exist.



~Micky Dee~




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      Prisana Nuechterlein 4 years ago from Thailand and Colorado

      To a love that doesn't there one who does exist? Nice ebb and flow, she comes and goes...

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      Brenda Lorraine Scully 4 years ago from Ireland

      awwwww I so liked this ........

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Terrific poem from start to end. Voted Up Awesome!

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      Pastor Dr. Carlotta Boles 4 years ago from BREAKOUT MINISTRIES, INC. KC

      NICE!!!!!!!! Voted-up! I have missed you! Been very busy counseling, but I am back! Come visit when you have a chance. God Bless you!!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Brilliant construction of a rhyming poem. Some of the words were pure genius.

      The content was beautiful, though a little sad.

      Super work, Micky.

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      Martie Coetser 4 years ago from South Africa


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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Great poetry, thank you for sharing. Jamie

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      Kathi 4 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Hey Micky you're so fine you blow my mind, hey Micky

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      prasetio30 4 years ago from malang-indonesia

      Beautiful, uncle. I always love your poem. This is one of your best. Thanks for writing and sharing with us. Voted up!


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      dialogue 4 years ago

      The title made me to read the hub. The writing is great, i felt like reading the same again, it is beautiful. Great work!

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      Audrey Hunt 4 years ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      Micky - This is so beautiful! I adore your writing. You have such a gift for planting just the right word in the right place. Thank you dear man!

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      Hummingbird5356 4 years ago

      Beautiful as always, Micky

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      Nikki Wicked 4 years ago from Louisiana

      Literally, shes the girl of your dreams. Don't let this one go! lol Sometimes our imaginations can just run away with us it almost seems real, like Alice or Dorothy, created worlds of their own, and the question still remains..was it ever real?

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      How true your title is, love is fleeting and elusive like a butterly in flight. Nicely versed Micky and as always brilliantly shared.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      This has a nice flow to it. i enjoyed it very much.

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      Tom Rubenoff 4 years ago from United States

      You are a rhyming field, Micky :) Voted up