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In Mute

Updated on December 13, 2011


Burry emotion deep inside

Faking happiness is nearly impossible

A young girl sat in mute; she cried


Tighten chest, shallow breath

Lingering in pain

She felt trapped in a dark well or carried off by a crimson cloud


Bruised marked her skin

Scar formed her heart

Soul weakens by her painful cries; she wants to die


Seeing her mother drunk, becoming violent

Remind of her childhood life

In her mind, memories rewind and there she sat feeling miserable


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      charlonefox 5 years ago

      Loved it :)

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      AliceFSpencer 5 years ago from Texas

      This was wonderful, and sad a perfect picture was drawn..awesome

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      wearenotthesame00 5 years ago from My Own Fantasy World...

      Like it (:

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Charlonefox,alice,wearenotthesame00, thank you! :)

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      Derdriu 5 years ago

      Chanroth, What raw and searing experiences are conveyed with your brutal images and graphic words! In particular, I like the way in which you give the child the voice which she was too afraid and ashamed to use.

      Thank you for sharing, etc.,

      Derdriu

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You know sometims as children we lacked the courage to speak up. Now as adults, we find our voice. I can relate...Thank you Dear one...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      It's good but when do the happy poems begin???

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi derdriu, Ruby and Gypsy, thank you! @Gypsy, I will do the happy poem today! :)

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